Okay this is my first time writing save for at school It's not very long it's more like a little tester. i would really like some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. I don't want to see any "you suck!!"'s i know it's not very good but i'm going to try to get better at this because i REALLY love reading!! so please help me and don't be afraid to hurt my feelings. I'm a tough cookie!!
"Why?! Just tell me why and I can leave at least a little satisfied!" She demanded. I couldn't lie to her "Just tell me WHY!!" She'd fined out eventually. "WHY!!!" Fuck!
"IT'S BECAUSE I'M IN LOVE WITH A MAN!" I shouted as i looked at my feet. I knew she wouldn't understand. I knew she would look at me with that look of disgust. I reluctantly looked up at her face,hoping to find understanding eyes. Damn.
"What?" she whispered in horror, stabbing me with those damn eyes. I knew she heard me and I knew she understood but I said it again, this time calmer.
"I love a man, that's why I'm ending this." I said this with tears in my eyes.She stared at me. Isabel is a beautiful girl, she's 15 and is 5' 5'' with a almost fully developed body. She has dark piercing eyes that could kill. Why won't she just look away! She stares at me for a minute more before walking away. She doesn't say anything just turns and walks away. shit.
