Crossmare: Scratches (Soon To Be An Oc Original Comic)

Listen (ch+AN)

Listen child. To the word of a broken man. Listen to the pain her faces with a new friend.

Listen to a broken boy with the value of friendship tainted at the very start.

In a world in which good and evil swap places, what could go wrong?

Nothing. Nothing at all.

For you see... The boy finds out the friendship is corrupt in the beginning. And the man will let go of some tradgedies. All in good time. All in good time.

I my darling, am here. Watching, but at a distance. My story was dark, yet I fulfilled my duty to this world. I am just here to watch.

You. There is a broken fiend in this world. But who does it like with?

It likes with you... You dreaded creature.

Let the light go out on this story. Let it die. Tragedy is only a few steps away.

It always is.....

Dear Mr., What have you started? What have you lost?

You have lost your friend, lost your brother, your lover. You have lost all you have cared about.

You see. There is no excuse for these actions.

-Dream POV-

Ever wondered what happened when someone died? Their body becomes a empty shell. They can't feel anymore pain. All the feel is coldness.

I look out a small window in the hallway. It's dark outside. It's showing the impending storm. The storm that is just arriving.

The storm that brings to enemies together.

A storm that will make choices.

A storm that shows no mercy on the week.

A storm brought by me.

A storm that will signal the end.

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Ok. So I have to say that Crossmare: Scratches may or may not be discontinued.

Before you start freaking out, no I'm not scrapping the story completely.

I may just reuse the concept and make an original comic on it. I'm falling out of the Undertale fandom and I still love this story. But I want the story to still remain relevant even when the fandom dies.

So, if I make an original story off of this, I probably will post it on here or on DeviantArt. I just don't know. I will have to rewrite some personalities, but for the most part I should be good. Because the characters take on the opposite persona.

Here is one of the characters, he will be taking Cross's place but will still be energetic but chill:

I think his name shall be Alex. I do want to change his weapon choice to smaller sets of knives.

Then the ghost:

There is a running joke between them and I think her name should be Blair. My signature isn't on here because I took this picture before I wrote it down.

Don't ask. I was trying something.

And yes I have sketched out a screen of the Chapter: Torture.

So... Should I make this an original comic?

Yes?

No?

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Btw check out my art book, it's pretty lit.

BYE!