Sorry! Sorry! Sorry!

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As the title says, I'm very sorry for doing this. Right now I believe that this story has 3 things that are completely terrible about this story

1. Izumi is way too overpowered, she almost never gets tired. I don't even remember her struggling at all in a fight.

2. There isn't any character development. So, Izumi doesn't grow very much and the relationships don't progress smoothly, Shoto and Izumi don't seem like they're dating at all.

3. The story progression is way too quick, basically, I have the story just skip a month and then another month. So, I don't like a story that is too quick or too slow, but it also depends on what happens in between that time skip.

So, I may continue writing this story at a later date or rewriting it under a different story, but for now, this is goodbye.

So, I may continue writing this story at a later date or rewriting it under a different story, but for now, this is goodbye

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