Very poor story-line and character development, but great use of diction:

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There was a spark, an incendiary flash of light that is soon consumed by the ubiquitous darkness and then the vivifying process starts again. This pattern is the process that allows the author to pull the thoughts from the barren Caverns of their mind and place them on to paper. This process happens no matter how sophomoric or intellectually profound the authors mind is. The power to put words to paper is the intellectual equivalent of being able to raze a building with your bare hands. There were three heroes that were able to do all of these things if they only worked together. As you will soon see there will be many challenges that will force them to collaborate for them to reach their goal.
The first character of this story that you shall be introduced to is a vigilant enthusiast of expression. His name is Voice; Voice keeps in mind the visceral feelings of others. You could say he strongly practices altruism which will soon be the harbinger of his death. Voice is a strong leader but a stronger speaker he uses explicit detail to support the point that he tries to instill into the people that he speaks to.
On Voice’s Voyage that was built on vanquishing vicious villains from his violent past of malevolent miscreants making a maleficent miasma that is brought about when he is spotted by a member of his past coterie. The only foible of his person is his past; some might say his luck with women is another but he him self would think that to a folly thought. Which is how he knows this next character who some would say is a virago or a wench but, Voice knows her as Fluency.
Fluency speaks with a flowing eloquence that is euphonious to the ears of the receiver. The way she can efficaciously propagandize crowds to do her biding. She has a knack for controlling and manipulating people she does this through her structuring of words or matching the words to thoughts to create a powerful speech that can move people to do trenchant things. Fluency did not just happen to stumble upon this greatness though serendipity; she had to plunder through multiple quagmires her heart has ossified and left no room for what is seen as the stereotypical desires of a silly girl. She sees herself as a god she thinks she has waxed above others. She is filled with ruth.
It is interesting that Voice should run into Fluency at a time like this when he is at his most venerable state. Luckily there was someone who would be able to keep the peace between the two; that person being Word Choice. Word Choice was old and feeble but he was also one of the wisest of the five. He was very somnolent; even the slight zephyr could wake him from his sleep. He also had the strongest vocabulary among the group yet his speech was very laconic. He was seminally to be taciturn. Word Choice was more of the brains and the viscous that held everything together.Even though he was old he always found a way to be spontaneous he tried to keep the life that he had exciting. Word Choice though feeble makes a large and overly spectacular entrance; for example once he jumped from the top of a building onto the roof of a near car unexpectedly just to try to strike fear into a fellow team member who is known as Organization. Organization is the second oldest of the group he has known Word Choice for years upon years they have a friendship that seams to last for ever but, nothing lasts forever. 
Voice was about to make the mistake of trying to “make a move” on the elegant Fluency luckily Word Choice was there to stop all moves from being made and of course with a bang. He came in on a jet pack that flew off of him when he landed and exploded with a large array of colors. This entrance was filled with incendiaries made by Organization most people when they get old they are thought to ramble on when they talk and their thoughts are very mixed up but in the case of Organization he is always on topic and concise and he loathes the thought of his thoughts being disorganized. When Word Choice made his entrance they all knew that Organization was soon to follow. The strange thing was Organization was no where to be seen.
They soon found out why there were the soft sound of Idea’s sly and distinct foot steps. Idea always walked on her toes making as little sound as possible but in this case the sound has been amplified because the room was an ellipse and Idea was at one foci and everyone else was at the other foci making the sound easily heard. Idea and Organization have not been well acquainted since one of Organizations explosions killed Idea’s daughter. Idea was one that never strayed from the main goal you could say she always stayed on topic. She always expressed her opinion and made sure that her point was understood. In the mist of this dramatic scene Organization walked in and the room was as silent as a forest at night. Soon after everyone was settling in and tying to break the tension there was a click of a bomb that was made by the evil conclusion who decided that he was going to end it all and kill everyone including himself. These heroes will be forever remembered as the ones who were able to be greater than Hitler more powerful than Napoleon and much better leaders than Alexander the great but instead they were killed by their mortal enemy a story that was unexpected because in most fairy tales the good guys win but this story is an unusual one that is not limited by the happily ever after like the other ones.

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