Fen'Harel's Secret

Chapter 4: Their World.

Hello everyone, and welcome another chapter of my newest story Fen'Harel's Secret! 

Ok before I start this next chapter, I have a couple things to let you know yet again...

* I may be delayed in my uploads since I am working on a story for publishing so that will be taking up most of my time as well as looking for work and family things that will arise.

* If anyone ever feels I take too long for uploading please PM (Private Message) me or comment/review and I will get onto the next chapter as so as I can to upload it for you.

* I will update you on my new characters in each chapter just so you know their of my creation.

NOTE: Apologies for the long wait for the whole Conclave and start of the Inquisition thing but I have a plot and all this mini stuff that joins together to how things will fit into the story so PLEASE bear with me and the story line for now.

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Dragon Age Plot or Characters, ALL RIGHTS GO TO THE ORIGINAL MAKERS... All I own is just my own twist on things and of course my own characters.

Edit on Character:

* Keeper Deshanna Istimaethoriel Lavellan - Ok so this was stumped me for a bit for me... Unless I have not been looking everywhere or on some unknown site, I see no where were it states that the Keeper of the Lavellan Clan is male or female the closest I got was a site that said Deshanna (first name) is a feminie name so I'm stating in this fanfic story of mine that the Keeper of the Lavellan Clan is a female.

If anyone has any info on the Keeper of the Lavellan Clan please PM me!

My Characters in this chapter;

Main Character:

* Given name by Clan Lavellen - Fen Da'len

[MEANING of name: Wolf Child]

(Her name that she was given by her parents will be revealed later on...)

Other Character/s:

* Madam Serena Luppi (Human, Tailor/Clothes Shop Owner)

* Rosa and Clarence Stanley (Sister and Brother, both humans, Clarence talked about not seen, parents talked about but not seen or names noted)

*Crew on ship (no names)

Alright now that is all outta the way, onwards with the story...

Fen Da'len's POV.

Once we had all packed up, the Templars put their helmets back on and formed the same sort of position as yesterday for walking, Gordon was front left, Jakob front right, Sebastian back left, Kenneth back right, forming a square like position. Galyan was walking on my right-hand side, and we were in the middle of the Templars for our protection as Gordon keeps saying, we had been walking for a while, I felt like I got to know more about them each in such a short time. Jakob reminded me of a child, but he seemed to so much wit as well, Kenneth seems to be the bragging and joking type, Sebastian seemed quiet, laid-back and sincere. Gordon, he was quiet and has sheltered himself because of his past, but he's a good man, then there's Galyan, he jokes but can be serious, he knows a lot as well like Gordon, and he's cautious but stands up for what's right.