Jeff the killer and his brother

Chapter 1

"GO TO SLEEP!!!!!!!" The killer said as he pointed the knife to the women, then with one final swoop, she was done. After he was done with his masterpiece he wrote on the wall go to sleep. "Fuck," he said as he heard the sirens of the cops, he jumped then he was gone.

Slender mansion

"Fuck you, BEN," Jeff said as he chased Ben around the living room.

"Oh, are you a sexy woman???" Ben said jokingly. Jeff growled at his remark and stabbed Ben. Jeff and Ben felt something grabbed around their waists.

"STOP!" boomed Slenderman, as he said that it was almost like the whole mansion shook."Jeff, how many did you kill this week?"

"I lost count after 20 but some nuns ran I killed them all."

"Good" said Slender. Slender let go of Jeff and Ben.

"A nurse found dead and a patient missing please be on the lo-" Jeff turned off the TV.

"Hey," they all said in unison ( E.J., L.J., Jane, Ben, Toymaker, Ticci Toby, Hoody, & Masky.)

"That was not me, that was somebody else so let's not bother," Jeff said.

Ben stared "we got to figr-" "NO!" Jeff yelled. They all stared at how he said no really quickly like he thought it was someone he knew.

~time skip~

The boy Liu ran from the hospital, the memory of what happened was still there, he was wanting answers from Jeff. He ran and ran until he found woods and stayed there hiding he realized he had another personality, the personality told Liu that its name was Sully.

Slender mansion

" Jeff, why are you so pissed all of the sudden?" Ben asked as the rest stared at Jeff to see his reaction, as Jeff was about to yell he went outside instead, the rest followed to see what was going on. Jeff noticed someone in the woods so he told them to be quiet. Ben looked confused then look out to the woods and noticed the same thing.

"Who's there?" Jeff yelled as he waited for an answer he heard somebody say

"Jeff is that you?" Jeff was shocked and so were the others but not as shocked as Jeff was.

"Do you know anybody Jeff?" E.J. asked. Jeff ignored him and started to move towards the woods.

Ben noticed that Jeff was crying and teased, "Why are you crying baby Jeff?" 

Jeff growls at Ben then yelled out to the woods, "I am going to ask a question that only one person knows and you answer it OK? What did I write on the mirror the day I went home from the hospital? "

The voice answered, "Am I beautiful?" Jeff started to cry insensibly as the others watched confused.

Jeff then said as he was crying, " I thought that I killed you, I am so glad that I didn't kill you, I am so sorry Liu."

The voice then replied, "It's a fine brother." Liu came out of the woods and ran up to Jeff hugging him. The others watched baffled at what had happened.

"You have a brother?!" They all said together. Ben noticed Liu was in a hospital gown and a black and white striped scarf.

"You're the one who escaped and killed a nurse weren't you?" Ben asked Liu nodded.

"Liu let's get you into clothing," Jeff said. Liu followed his brother and as he did, he turned to the others and smiled evilly, the others were disturbed at this and decided to watch them in secret.

Jeff and Liu went into Jeff's room and Liu got changed as they did Jeff asked: "What was that voice when you answer my question?" ( the others had a camera hidden in Jeff's room and was watching it in the living room)

"It was another personality that I have his name is Sully." as Liu said the last part he jumped on and slit his neck and said "That is for slicing me up," Jeff screamed as blood leaked all over the bed and out of his wound. The others turned the channel then ran into his room where they saw Jeff bleeding and Liu passed out.

From the author, tell me if this is good this is my first time writing a story of any sort.

From the editor, no she didn't have an editor before but she definitely needed one. Any of you who read this before know that. There were even grammatical errors in her author's note, that was only one sentence. Also if you want to find my account and read my grammatically correct stories my username is @Nalulover154.