fateful [Completely Dead]

chapter 7

Chara woke up two days after alphys check up,

Chara POV

I woke in my bed and looked at my digital clock (it has the date on it) and I realized I had been out for almost two weeks and it was Friday at 5:00 PM three dad before the wedding,  witch was the first thing that crossed my mind and then it all hit me at once.... I have been out for TWO WEEKS! I very quickly got up and began getting changed realizing Someone (probably toriel)  had been changing my cloths. I changed out of the PJs I had on into my black undershirt and black pants and rushed downstairs to see what I could find. When I came downstairs I was quickly greeted by Toriel "ah I see you are finally awake my child, I would like to inform you you won't be going to school for the next month due to your blood loss."  'blood loss?' I thought before asking her about it "what do you mean blood loss?" "what I mean child is that you hit your head passed out and lost a very large amount of blood, and you shouldn't worry about school I already called and told them about your 'accident'..." Toriel said answering both my questions before I could ask the second one. Just then asreil came in with frisk both of them covers in bruises and frisk seemed to be covered in tears.  "frisk! Azzy! What happened?" I said rushing over to them while mom rushed upstairs to get the first aid kit. "y-y-you remember th-that one kid that yo-you scared off?" he said forcing himself to speak. "yes of course I do, how could I not? He was bullying frisk!" I said answering his question "yeah well without our 'demon bodyguard' he said we where weak and couldn't protect ourselves" he said once more quoting what the kid had said to him "well guys I'm so so so so so so so so so so so so so sorry I wasn't their for you guys and I let you get beat up!" I said pulling them into a tight hug trying not to touch their bruises. "c-c-chara it's o-o-okay we for-forgive y-you" frisk seemed to be forcing their words out of their mouth

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