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Author to the lemon story: Vivankross
Plot description: A chubby lemon girl ps(actually a woman who is twenty eight, borderline old hag) and her sleazy lemon ex-boy toy who is now a dried up lemon zombie who used to think of himself as hot shit BUT WHAT ABOUT NOW HUH? NOW HE IS BOOGIE SHERRIF keeping her hostage in a jail cell. Ps, He is kinda boogie hot I overexaggerate sometimes....but defiantly his other two friends (Or are they friends?) are not in the boogie hot category.
Will she escape the jail cell that she locked herself in (like an idiot) to keep his boogie hands from dipping into the hot pocket that he once touched with desire or will he literally be eating that hot pocket disturbingly (Enough to make lemon fairies scream and scatter) or just be a dumb Zombo and never figure out how to get into the stupid cell.
Should you read this: Probably if you are the type to be into the OH YES MY HOT ZOMBIES EX IS GOING TO EAT MY HOT POCKET OUT if he gets inside the cell. Then yes this story is 100 percent for you!
My rating: 9/10 Lemony goodness! Skinny sleazy lemon x fat lemon is a good paring. I especially enjoyed the hello kitty chapter, it was like a nice sour lemon freshly squeezed into my mouth or should I say down my throat and then spat on to the gravel while in public. The lemon was ripe and ready to squeezed into my drink at a restaurant to add just the tasty flavor it needs. NIce job Viv. 🍋
Pros: Lemon parking lot scene, sleazy lemon boy, chubby lemon girl, mad pooper lemon who poops everywhere (gotta love those crohners) Sexy sleazy lemon boy/man and a fat main character who will maybe just maybe die of diabetes before the Zombo gets her.
Cons: scarey zombies that frighten the Lemon fairies and the very descriptive anatomy.
Originality: 100 percent lemon original although the bad boy and zombie is cliche but somehow Lemon Viv makes it work.
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