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It has been two months. .since abhay came India. .every day and night he used to think of only one girl and that is ...none other than Pia. .
Mumbai
Abhay: what the hell ...why is it raining now. ..and this car...randown. .why..uff
Laksh: abhay..see there is party going on..let's go
Abhay : what...are u sick..I guess the water has entered in ur brain. .
Bt Laksh drags him in the hotel..guests are there talking about the couple...
Laksh : hmm.the bride must be hot...
Abhay : then let's check her out..
They goes near the stage..bt it's too crowded...abhay feels his heartbeat going faster...he feels so uneasy
Laksh : uff..we can't see anything. ..doesn't matter..let's eat..
Abhay still trying to see..
Abhay : no let's see the bride first..
Laksh : did I forget ..that it's their ceremony so they will stay..we need to run fast ...
Abhay still not moving..laksh saw the food..and left to eat..abhay yet trying hard...
Laksh comes with sweets..and offer them to abhay..just then...all te crowd separated. .and he saw the couple ..tears ran down..
Abhay pushed laksh and ran away..in rain..in....pain..
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Pia: why..why...am..I feeling so restless. ..what is happening. .God. .help me...should I call him...no no I can't. ..he was my past..I have to move on...common pia..for sake of ur....
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Dehradun
Chand: why this abhay is not answering the phone. ..
Haseena;: I m so worried
Chand : it's okay ..he is a young brat..must be having fun..
Chand is also tensed..just not showing. ..
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A boy is walking in the rain...it's abhay
Abhay : why...why did u do that. ..I hate u...do u hear...I hate u...
Abhay bend down in his knees. ..crying
Abhay: this is what u want na..fine..I ll do it...I ll show u..tags I m not weak..I m The Abhay Raichand. ..
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What do u all think why abhay is so hurt..
What happened in two months. ..
Why pia is sad...
How was thus twist...do give ur views...
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