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After dance Rxn

Then finally...

Suman went on the stage.Still butterflies were flying inside her stomach. Going on the stage she did namaskaram  to the audience and the musicians in the typical cultural style.

And the beat began , it didn't tool Suman a moment to forget herself a and just go with the flow of music, she was enjoying it.

It didn't seem now that she was nervous , her each step was the beat and final when she was in the middle of the dance , her best part , she was doing that typical dance step of circling around.She closed her eyes  and was enjoying that moment that atmosphere, that air. She seemed to be lost, she was having a wide smile on her face , her bright white coloured costume was in air. She was feeling at the top of the world , just music beats and her steps.

She was feeling like she was on this earth just to experience this one moment in her life. Her first performance in front of the world.

Soon , the beats changed and she came back to reality ,with her killer expressions . But, this time the nervousness that was at the starting and with each step she was just getting  out more of her.

On the other side.. behind the stage (ghat)

Nama Mam :(praying God) thank you God, thank you so much to gift me , my girl. Today she gave price for every drop of hard work of this ten years for her. She just made my day.

Anu:  Dam..I didn't knew ye itna sexy
  dance karti hai. I luv u motu.
Just superb.

Vivu: She is dancing so beautifully know, Anu.

Anu:(in response to vivu) hmm..

Suman's mother:.(sitting in audience with rest of the tiwari family)
Hey, bhagwan meridian beti ko kisiki  nazar na lage na. Kitna acha dance kar rahi hai.

On the  other side...

Shravan was surprised looking at her and completely distracted from her ""Naira finding mission"".  
And Pushkar shaking him with his hand was saying excitingly . "Bhai ye ladki kitna acha dance karti hai.

Shravan :(looking at him with weird expression) bas chote, dance woh kar rahi hai , air khushi ke mare excite tu ho raha hai. Shanti, chote ,shanti..

Pushkar :nai Bhai ,won main pehli bar , aise mandir mein dance dekhna aaya hun.

Shravan : chote , hum bhi yaha pehli bar hi aaye hai.

And than  her performance ended.

Back stage.

As , Suman entered the dressing room rubbing her hands, eager to know the reaction.  Then her both aliens jumped over on her with the excitement.

Anu : (hugging her tightly) kamini itna acha nachti thi , kabhi bataya kyun nahi, aur.woh bhi itne sexy looks ke sath.

Vivu : (also hugging her ) you dance very beautifully, main to dekhe k shock ho gaya tha . Mujhe to laga hi nahi tha ke ye aise dance karegi.....

He was interupted by somebody's presence.
Seeing him stop she moved around in his direction. Her pretty Preeti entered with huge smile on her face and looking at her Vivu was having even big smile on his face seeing her.

Before any body could say anything.

Vivu :(with huge smile on his face and excitedly)
Preeti you here? Why? And you are looking beautiful today.

Preeti was looking little confused but was blushing inside at his cute gesture.

Motu and Anu marked their presence by coughing.

Preeti shyly went towards Motu and hugged her.

Preeti : Motu di u danced superb. Every one was outside was just talking about you and your dance.

Then, Vivu interrupting in between.

Vivu: (little inquiring ly)  tum Motu di kyun bol rahi ho?
U r like us only, say her Motu only.

Motu: tujhe badi problem ho rahi hai,she  is my pretty preeti let her say what she likes.

Outside, Shravan finally finds"Naira"and goes towards her, and asks innocently.

Shravan: Naira tum yaha?

Naira looking surprised, tum haha?Ya actually I came here with Dadu and whole family for pooja .

Shravan: Ya pooja and also your cousin's dance.
Naira: cousin's dance?
(after a second) u r talking about Suman?
Shravan : ya.
Hearing her name, suddenly the expression of Naira's face changed .

Pushkar was still in search,for somebody and his mission was on the go.

And just he over heard his brothers words "your cousin".

Pushkar going towards where Naira and Shravan were standing .

Pushkar:  hi, Naira.

Naira: hi.

Pushkar: Did u saw that girl dancing,she was dancing beautifully know and also I hear some people saying that it was her first time.

Naira: ya, she danced well (with little dull tone in her voice).

Somebody called her name out and looking in the direction of call backside , than she took leave from both the brothers.

Shravan was looking Naira go and Pushkar was still looking here and there searching someone.

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