Strange places (18+) (COMPLETED)

Madness

The voices were still there.They woke me up ,the moment i opened my eyes it was quiet .Silence.I looked around i was alone.Chris was not in sight.My hands were still tied,my wrists were bleeding.I had been fighting to get free.I wriggled them a little bit and i could feel one hand become loose.I continued to fiddle with the rope and with a strong but painful tug it came loose.My body was sore.With bites and cuts all over them that were painful.I stood up quickly and ran into the bathroom.There was no one there.I ran back into the room."You,youre causing this ",I said to the picture on the wall.The man was still out of the picture."Save him",a voice said from the painting.I moved closer to it looking at it.There was no one there.Was someone looking at me from the other side of the room.I grabbed the corner of the frame and tried to lift it.It was sealed tightly on the wall.I pulled harder and i could feel my nails breaking from the tension but i wasnt going to stop.I pulled harder.It wasnt moving.Then something grabbed my face.Covering my whole face i couldnt see.I tried to break free.My hands were slippery from whatever it was as i tried to pull it off my face.It pulled my face inside the picture ,my body hanging on the other side of reality.It let go but i was still stuck."Save him,save him now.He will be gone forever".Her face had chunks of flesh ripped out of it and she was smelling rotten."Save who?"I asked."He is coming back.Go,go"she said looking frantically in all directions.She literally punched me out all i could see were stars and everything went black.

My head was aching.I opened my eyes but my vision was blurry it took a while to see what was around me.I finally made the two silhouettes ."Hazel,are you okay baby".Chris said coming over to the bed.He held me and i started crying.So hard i didnt know what was real and not real anymore.What if i was yanked out of this dream too,were he was holding me and it was daylight and everything was okay."I will be close by if you need me.I will leave you two alone",Mama Loles said.I looked at her as she walked out.She was walking in the air.Her feet were not touching the ground or did she even have any feet at all.The door closed."Baby whats going on with you",he said cuddling me."What happened "I asked him.He looked at me."Well i was in the shower you said you were going to get dinner and it took you forever so i went out to look for you.I heard screams and i ran back here and you were shaking on the floor.I had to call the lady to help",he said..That was not true.That was not what happened.This was not Chris.I was not talking to my man right now ,and this ,all this was not real.The cloth that had hung on the picture was there.I knew what was under it.I couldn't leave now.I couldn't run because that mearnt leaving my Chris behind.

Flashback
We sat on the crystal sands ,the cool ocean breeze kissing our cheeks.It was heaven,well it had been for the past 15 months.I rolled over and looked at Chris."Baby whats the worst thing that could happen to us?" I asked him.He sat on his side and looked at me.He thought for a while."Something taking over my mind that i forget how i completely adore you and how youre my world.But that,that my baby will never happen because as long as im alive i will cherish you."He said."And the best?"I asked."The day i ask you to marry me"he said and looked up to the sky.I smiled.I didnt know when that was but i would have jumped at the very first chance to spend my life with this man.He was my everything."Hey baby get me some suncreen from my bag will you,small pocket"he said.I opened the zip.There was no suncreen,there was a little box.I took it out and opened it.There was a ring.I looked at Chris who was smiling like he had just won the lottery."Will you marry me"he asked.So today was the day.It was today.I thought to myself.I was speechless."Me ,?"I said looking at the ring.He took it from my hand and held my left hand.He kissed it soflty."Will you?"."Yes Chris,I will.".I said jumping on him to hug him.We had just made a promise to each other and i knew from this day that i would do anything to fight for us..

I didnt have a plan.I just knew that whatever it was that i had to fight was in that painting.It was in the history of this place.I waited until Chris went in the shower.I took my little backpack and put some basics in it.Making sure to keep quiet.I tiptoed out of the room and as soon as i was out i ran so fast towards the gate.I looked back at the house.There it was,the shadow of a man."Im coming back for you"I said.I was going on an adventure of my own...............,,,,,,,,..............................................................................................................................................

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