Pointing Things Out

Pointing Things Out: Part 1

I've read different types of books on Wattpad, Like Teen Fiction, FanFiction,  Humor, Vampires, and way more, and Through out those types of stories, Theres a lot of things, how should I say this, that I need to point out here on this story.

Let's begin with describing the characters of the story. Now tell me, Ladies and Gentlemen,  have you ever read a book and this sort of description came up.

I'm just your average girl, with blonde, long hair and blue eyes.

Because believe me, I've read this so many times, that I'm starting to think I have blonde hair and blue eyes, which I don't, Sadly.

As I was saying, these types of descriptions are really cliche! I actually like to know how the characters are like but not like this. That's one thing I like to point out.

Secondly, I absolutely, positively, extraordinarily hate when the author describes what the character is wearing. Okay maybe I'm pushing it, but there are a lot of ways authors describe what the character is wearing, like for instance, I like it when it's like this:

As I was walking to Burger King in my sweatpants and tank top, I noticed Ronald McDonald staring at me for not coming into McDonald's.

I like it when they just let it slip, then going back to what's actually important.

But what I don't like is when some authors are just like:

I'm going to Burger King in my Hollister skinny jeans, my Forever 21 floral printed crop top, with my Michael Kors high heels.

Like i really don't like to know what they're specifically wearing, so I just don't read the story. Speaking of which, who goes to Burger King in high heels?

Thirdly, you know when you're reading a story and there's always this high school popular girl? Who, in most stories I read, is always the bully to the average girl in the story? Yeah her, She's always described as the girl who 'sleeps with every guy in the school'.

Oh, there's Jessica, who knows how many guys she slept with this week.

It's actually kind of irritating!

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Well that's it for now folks, tune in next time for part 2!

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