Response to DemmyVampireAcademy's Love, Pain, Hate.
I love the feelings in this piece,
The mixture of words in the emotional sea,
But you know, there's nothing that can be improved,
Poetry is art, a reflection of you.
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Love, Pain, Hate is about a harsh breakup where the guy left the girl and didn't bother to soften her fall. DemmyVampireAcademy asked for constructive criticism. That's for the latter half of the poem.
Avarie.
