Naruto Uzumaki (Protector)

Chapter 11

It's been over a week since I've been in my mindscape with Kurama learning how to you use and control his chakra and learning the biju (idk if I spelt it right or wrong) form and I've finally perfected it all. All I have to do now is wake up and start training my little brother. But I still can't show him who I am yet...it will only put him in more danger. So I will have to teach him in my anbu form.Its the only way for him to learn how to protect himself and if he's ready I can also show him our clans secrets, sealing techniques, taijutsu style, tou-san's rasengan and his special ability the cloying thunder technique, and finally kaasan's chakra chains. Only if he shows he is worthy enough and if he's not then I can only show him an effective taijutsu style that isn't our clan's, and ninjutsu, kenjutsu if he able to do it, and genjutsu. To a point where he's the strongest out of his class and can protect himself against SS- rank ninjas he could probably reach that when he turns 18 with the help of some friends when I can't train him anymore when I'm gone.  
When I woke up I sensed a familiar presence then I heard "Naruto your awake!!" You had us all worried and and I-I thought I could've lost you. Calm down.... Kakashi you won't lose me anytime soon. I told you....I won't die and that...I will come back to you. Now...help me get out of here...I hate being in hospitals...and I'm already healed up...so let's go. We made it back to my hotel I was staying at and hung out for a while. Everything was going good until it got my intriguing. "I was wondering if all that you said back there to get me to leave was it true, or where you saying that to get me to leave" asked Kakashi. If your talking about the... I love you part...it is true. I do love you...and besides I don't just....kiss anyone even if my mask....is on or off....and I don't say I love you to anyone...so what about you... I know he loves me, but I want to make sure and see if he's going to prove himself to me. I want to know if he's really the one like my inner wolf keeps telling me. "I-I love you too I have for two years now I just didn't know how to tell you or if it will ruin our friendship." It's okay now... so do you want to make....us official...do you want to be my boyfriend.... I asked Kakashi. Yes yes!! He said. With that we kissed. It was better than our first kiss. The tingling sensation overcoming my body. The electric shocks on my lips are making them get hot and hotter each sec. The passion and love behind the kiss is overwhelmingly amazing. I pushed Kakashi towards the couch and pushed him down and pinned him."my little pup you are making a mistake thinking I'm going to let this relationship be easy for you" I whispered in his ear.making him shudder in response. I teased him a bit putting my hand under his shirt and rubbing his stomach going up and down then squeezing his nipples while kissing him. He moaned at all this and it was music to my ears. But I knew we had to stop before we go to far. With a disappointing sigh I separated myself from him. And heard a whimper from Kakashi. And I said We have to...stop before we...go too far love. Don't worry puppy...we have plenty of time to... finish what we started... your mine and I'm yours...i said to him possessively. Besides I have...to ask you to do something...for me..I want you, Anko, and Iruka... to help me train my brother....when I'm not here, either doing a...mission or something out of...the village. I want him to be able to protect himself...against powerful enemies... because of who our father...was. So I want to train him early... to be more prepared and protected...So will you help me out...? "You have a brother?" Yes I do his name is Menma Uzumaki Namikaze... "Of course I'll help you train him." Thanks Kakashi I knew I could count....on you. After some time later we decided that it was getting late and that he should probably head home now we kissed goodbye and he left with a messed up shirt and his hair all messed up. With a smile on my face I fell asleep.

I was wondering if this was a good start for Kakashi and Naruto's relationship and if it was good writing for it