I read this amazing book. Of course you have
to give details of your characters right? Well
throughout this book, the author says "my
auburn hair" or something along those lines
that has to do with the protagonist's auburn
hair. But then as the protagonist is getting
ready, the author goes almost a page about
her hair like "chocolaty tips" and it being shiny,
straightenend, perfect tips, shiny, looked
perfect, and did I mention shiny? Minecraft
has given me this ocd thing so it bothered me..
a lot. Did she get her hair dyed recently?
Yes yes,details deatails but that much
was needed. Just watch out for those
mistakes,especially when you're saying the
same thing over again and with wrong facts.
The beautiful author is chellebell45. She is, That
i know of, not well. In May she said she was leaving because she had depression and wanted a break and was coming back in June. If you wouldn't mind, please go over and encourage her to come back to her loving family of 37,000. I have , lots. You may or may not know, I had and slightly still have depression so I do know what's it's like. So please do and read spin the bottle!
Thanks guys ♡ haters and ♥ friends (or friends) -Fizzy Izzie
