Disturbia

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Hi! I'm starting a new story, this time in the 'Horror' category. Hope you like my attempt at horror! Begin!

Summary: you think someone can look so sweet and innocent. If only you saw the true side of them that roams around at night. But, maybe they're totally unaware of it. Have you thought of that? That's just what happened to Joy Summers. She has no idea why everyone she cares about is slowly disappearing... When she is actually the cause of it. Well, not really HER. More like, I guess you can say her alter ego, Misery Payne who lives in an unpleasant world in her mind. Welcome...

To Disturbia. The land of the disturbed.

NOTE: I know there is already a movie named Disturbia. Please note that this has NOTHING WHATSOEVER to do with that movie, I have never even seen it. if it is somewhat similar, I have no idea what the storyline to that movie is supposed to be. Thank you.

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Is she being annoying? Is she ALWAYS annoying? Do you have those mini disturbing fantasies in your mind where she would just be out of your life forever? Shh, close your eyes, and relax. Let me take you on a tour.

Let's go down this street here. Now if you look to the left, you'll see a huge mansion. The only thing about this mansion, though, is it's on fire. The roof is burning, and a man inside a room filled with the most fire is screaming in pain and for mercy. Children are surrounding the burning building, laughing as if it is the funniest thing in the world. Oh, no, death doesn't scare kids here. If anything, it amuses them. Once you have been brought here, there's no help. Slowly - and painfully - the man burned to death, his skin turning to blisters.

If you look to the right, you'll see Scream Lake, a lake with crystal clear water. It tastes like salt, because it's made of the victims tears they shed when the fall to their knees with a knife plunged in their heart, and they know they're at their end.

But that's just how the Hammer Fish like it. The Hammer Fish are gigantic fish that look similar to sharks, only their head is shaped like a hammer.

And now if you look down there, straight ahead, you'll see the house of Misery Payne, stabbing her victim in the heart several times. Wave to Misery, newbie!

Oh, over there, that sign! It means our tour is over. But remember, this is only one street. There's more than you think.

On the sign, in big bold red letters, it spells...

'WELCOME TO DISTRBIA

THE LAND OF THE DISTURBED.'

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I know, it's short, but this is only the prologue. If you want a chapter 1, please vote and comment! Thank you :)

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⏰ Last updated: Jul 23, 2012 ⏰

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