Descriptions and samples.

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Hey random people! I really should be writing this right now, but I wanted to upload my character's description and a sample scene I wrote a while ago first.

Name: Sora

Age: 15

Hair: Light brown with faint blond highlights. She usually wears parts of it in two braids that connect in the back. (Like Asuna's I guess XD)

Eyes: Light blue

Normal clothing: (Crap I'm really bad at clothing...just imagine her in the blue starter outfit from Aura Kingdom. If you don't know what that is just imagine her in a light blue dress with dark blue leggings or something. Just add grey gloves and long sleeves. xD) Colors vary.

Extra: Both her right arm and leg are automail. (The reason shall be revealed later on.)

Sample scene: Sora meets Edward.

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-Edward's POV- (there would probably be a couple paragraphs before this explaining why he's going to Mustang's office)

I sighed as I prepared for the onslaught of short insults and scoldings to come as I grasped the doorknob of his office, Al close behind me. I turned the knob and slowly opened the door and peered inside. I walked in only to be tackled by a heavy weight. I yelped as I fell back, surprised by the sudden attack. When I looked at the face of my attacker, I met a pair of huge blue eyes.

"You're Edward Elric, right?! The Fullmetal Alchemist?!" The mysterious attacker asked in a high pitched, hyper-sounding voice.

"Y-Yeah, I am." I stuttered. Her eyes lit up more (If that's even possible). She leaped off of me and moved on to pester Al. I immediately got up and walked up to Kernel Mustang, who was grinning evilly at us.

"Who the heck is she?!" I whisper-yelled.

" Our newest state alchemist."

"Her!?"

He nodded. "At least you'll be working with a fan who's the same height as you. I actually think she's quite cute."

I felt anger bubble inside me.

"WHO'RE YOU CALLING A PIPSQUEAK?" I yelled.

"Probably us!" I heard a playful voice behind me and turned around to see the girl smiling innocently at me. I returned to my conversation just as she returned to hers.

"Good luck with her, she looks like she'll be a handful." I said smugly.

"I should be saying that to you, Fullmetal."

I paused. "Huh?" This hyperactive girl can't possibly be working with us. "Why me and Al?" I asked.

"Not very observant, are you? Take a closer look at her." He smirked. I looked over at her and scanned her up and down. She walked, talked, and moved like a regular person.

"Still not getting it." I said. He pointed to his ear, that smug grin still plastered on his face. I turned towards her as she jumped up and down, obviously excited about something. I closed my eyes and listened. That's when I heard it. Cling, Cling. I opened my eyes again. Every time her feet hit the ground I heard that same metallic sound. "Automail?" I whispered, turning back to Mustang, who nodded.

"Her right leg and right arm." He explained. "Don't know what happened, but her past remains buried deep. I've seen the scars on her arm, too. They look like yours."

I thought about it. "You think she did it?" He shrugged.

"No idea. She used transmutation circles on the test, but she could just have no idea that she doesn't have to use them." By the time he finished that sentence I was already gone. I walked straight to the hyperactive girl and began talking to her.

"H-hey." I started.

"Hi Edward!" She immediately responded.

"Say, I was wondering-" I was cut off by her.

"How I got my automail, right?"

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MUWAHAAHAHAA THATS ALL YOU GET. That's probably more than I've written at all in a few months though. *Hides from the angry mobs*

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