RHYMES OF THE SOUL

THE SAID & DONE

Dear readers,

I am really excited to share my poems with you on wattpad. I wrote most of this poems two years   ago they represent real life events and so are quite close to my heart. Please feel free to comment as I am only debuting and would welcome constructive critics which should help me improve on my writing. Thank you 

Promises were made but now  they  have  nothing left but shackle's & shades,

When the wrong came along  the end of the season had  almost  come;

it  was  never easy to make the daring  move,

it is always heart breaking to spoil the beauty of a love  groove ,

But how else could they relate ,

When he gave them no option but to separate,

She could'nt  seem to forget the time,

When love and hope were the primary ingredients of her every rhyme,

Sewn in them so deep,

It was like he was the purest  air she ever breathe,

How could  they go on?

When echo's  said their  story never begone,

For when words are tied to deceit ,

Love can only be a number one victim in line for defeat,

She cant seem to catch her breath,

But no having much more patience to watch the play unfold shall be her biggest  regret 

It is said you never let  go of what you love no matter how much the going gets rough,

She could'nt help but wonder was she not worth holding back any longer ?

or was she just another regular beat in the sound track,

The stand by player of his love match

she was left with no option but to stay strong,

now that it was clear to her that his love for her would never come

M.Rozie