Utakage's Vengeance [ON-GOING]

6th and 7th's Vengeance and Tainted Innocence

Hey GUYS!
I was actually planning on changing the whole plot of this one. Like literally I was about to discontinue this one and let another Wattpad User Adopt this. Seriously though this is also apart of my wattpad journey I just couldn't let go of easily but I think I did the right thing of passing it to someone else.

RoseyArchlightRain - this User is the one who Adopted this baby o' mine(The Neglected Squad:6th and 7th). Read it! It was actually cool if you'd ask me. Also please dear take care of this baby HAHAHA😅😅

Anyways My other purpose for this chapter is that I will make 2 new Naruto Fanfics.
The first is Tainted Innocence - I actually started finishing the first 2 chapters and is in the middle of writing the third one. I am making sure of any errors so that it wouldn't be on dead end unlike my other fics that I am still searching inside my brain to look for it's comtinuation. This New Baby will be posted after the fifth chapter is created which I feel would be soon enough😀😀😀

It was actually about Naruto, Sasuke and Hinata this time. I am not bringing hate upon Sakura in this fic but she will be annoying at the start and just like in the Canon she will wale up in the reality of the Ninjas' World. But she will be together with Kiba in the Future. As for the three main protagonists. I am making it Sasunaru/Narusasu again but they are the same gender this time. Hinata will also be with Gaara in the future so yep it was different from this fic as well. Yes Massacre will be continued and that Naruto is still kind of abused, Hinata is an illegitimate daughter that is shunned by the members and civilians too. I hope you'd be interested in the fic and hopefully would read it when I finally published it in Wattpad.

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hope you'd like this because I really put my heart to this one and would surely update it 5 chapters at a time.. in that way, I could plan it well on how will the flow of the story be as well as that I can edit it in advan e and make sure there are no grammar mistakes or shortage on the chapter before I publish it on wattpad.

While 6th and 7th's Vengeance is at the back of my head, I am still trying to think about the flow of this one... I will make it a Fem!Naru actually shipping is SasuNaru, ItaDei, SakuGaa, ShikaTema and I am thinking of pairing Kankuro with Hinata pr something for a new angle but it still wasn't justified. Unlike Tainted Innocence, I am planning on some gestures from my old Fic "Neglected Squad" but still there are quite changes still on it. I will publish 5 chapters at a time for this as well. I really do hope that you will love this fics I will publish.

Another Thing, I am sorry for my other Fanfics since I really am having a Writer's block whenever I try to think of their continuation... specially on my "Chowagakure: The Utakage's Revenge" , I just realized that since that the two main pairings already are married with kids ... I am having a hard time thinking like, "what would be the flow since it feels like it achieved the ending already" or that "should I make some love story for their children then? But what if the other readers won't like it since they came for the Story of 'NaruSasu/SasuNaru' and not the new generations" so tell me what you think about that and put it down on my comments if

1.) Should I edit it or change the whole fic altogether?

2.) Should I continue it and just create their children's stories or should I delete some of it and just take it all slowly or I could just use some humors  which I really don't like to suggest cuz it's harder that way. ?

Moving on, the "Years Of Pain" I don't know if you liked the Flow of it or Nah.. specially because I am just so happy at that time to create a short and subtle smut (which I lirerally don't like cuz that is my first time writing it and felt like it was rushed or something idk) I felt errors in there as well or something so I am giving questions for it again

1.) Do you want it to be edited only or be arranged altogether and take things a little bit slow?

2.) Any suggestions for the flow of the story?

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So yeah that was the gist of all of it. If there are other questions just comment down below and please for those people who have suggestions or something don't be shy and comment it and PLEASE give answers to my questions because It really is hard to decide myself.

And Another thing, I really hope you'd like "Tainted Innocence" and "6th and 7th's Vengeance cuz I in my perspectives .. it will be the Fanfic I am most certainly proud of. Thank you for reading this I love you guys so much and I really appreciate you guys who commented me ,read my stories and voted for all of my stories. I greatly appreciated it.

Once Again thank you guys so much and I love you guys so much.

- Mar_Chs♡

Edit : I forgot to edit it. Guys, Tainted Innocence is now Overlooked, the plot was changed and moved ti be a much more better(for me anyway) version compared to the first one, hope you guys would still read it! Muah!