memory loss (on hold for a very long time while editing)

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The disappearance

Hello, my name is Elina, I'm 14 years old. And I want to tell you about the day my life ended.

It was the day before my birthday; I was getting on the bus to ride home from school I got pushed and shoved to the back of the line. I sighed and stayed where I stood, knowing that I would have a place to sit because xak was saving me a seat. When I entered the bus I began to search through the rows for xak. But I couldn't find him. Hysteria began creeping up on me. And I had to sit by a stranger, A COMPLETE STRANGER. Sadly my stop is the last bus stop. Oh well xak will be here tomorrow. I waited 20 painful minutes. When my bus stop came I was deeply relieved through and through. When I stepped off the bus I realized that my mom was home, and she's always at work. Why is she home now? It must be something important. I hurried to the house.

When I walked inside the house and xak's mom was there, she saw me walk in, and she walked to me, took my hands in her hands. And quietly said

"sweetie xak is gone."

She let that sink in a bit and said

"he was here last night and then this morning...I called for him and...and called but he didn't come, so I went into his room and he wasn't there..."

she was watching me, watching my expressions, looking for any sign that betrayed what I was feeling, but I knew better than putting my feelings in her hands, I could only trust xak. Then xak's mom said

"I'm so sorry, are you okay?"

I had to reply they were expecting me to say something, if I didn't they would worry. So I decided what to say.

"I'm fine. It's okay. I bet that it's hard for you too."

i glanced over at xak's mom and saw she had tears streaming down her cheeks. The redness around her eyes made her look so vulnerable, it made my heart ache so bad it almost made me cry.

And so I said "look it's going to be okay."

I didn't say anymore because that would overdo it. But before I could say anything else

xak's mom said "I need to go home and take care of my kids. So goodbye, take care and other happy farewells."

And then she left. I ran outside, as fast as I could and into our field, I was headed for a small clearing of trees that I go when I'm upset or happy or sad. You get the general idea. As soon as I arrived I sank down beside an old twisted willow tree. Its long vines swaying around me, I looked around at the beauty of it all. The majestic trees losing their leaves, the beautiful tall grass, it gave me a hidden pleasure I didn't understand. I sat there and cried for hours until it started getting dark, and I knew that I had to get back or they would come and get me. I hate them coming here it's like my own place. So I got up wiped away my tears and started to go home.

Just as I was about to leave the grove someone said

"Elina."

I turned around and saw no one so I resumed walking. Then once more someone said a little louder

"Elina."

I recognized that voice. But he was gone wasn't he? I turned around and Xak was running toward me. I stood there shocked till he ran right next to me and lifted me up and spun me around the placed me gently back on the ground and stepped a few steps away from me. I ran to him and gave him a hug and said