Finntaine: Can I trust you?

Finn says Hi (Edited)

Hey guys,not sure what happened but it reverted back to the old version. Re-edit now😊

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Two days later, Finn's pov:

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It's been two days since I saw Fontaine. Enemy or not I've got it big for her. She's beautiful, string willed and just perfect. I pulled on my diving suit, and headed out of the moon pool. I saw Fontaine and ant swimming around and Ant had that fish with him.

She looked so relaxed in the water. I didn't want her to see me just yet. So I hid behind a rock, and watched on. Fontaine swam back I to the aronnax, grabbed a laminated map and then I turned on the communicater I had tuned to the aronax.

"I'm just gonna go swimming around mom!" She called.

"Okay Fontaine! You have two hours, we'll resurface soon." Kaiko replied.

"Yep sure!" Fontaine called back. I heard her run to the moon pool and jump in something so I assumed it was the rover. She left the aronax and then swam north, and I went after her.

She looked at the map a couple of times, and finally came to a stop in front of an under water cave. She pulled into it, and then she looked around. I noticed that there was air in here, and so did she. She jumped out I the rover.

Then she pulled out a guitar Case. The one I put the note in! And then she pulled out a little box. My heart skipped a beat. That was my necklace box. She blushed and slipped it on, and then sat down. She took some pictures of fish and then she pulled out the guitar, and started strumming. Then she started singing.

Five seconds of summer: amnesia
I drove by all the places we used to hang out getting wasted. I thought about our last kiss how it felt the way you tasted. And even though your friends tell me your doing fine, if what we had was real....

"Ughh nope. Not feeling it." she sighed.

Then she started strumming again. An played a song I had never heard before.....

Rewrite the stars:

You know I want you
It's not a secret I try to hide
I know you want me
So don't keep saying our hands are tied
You claim it's not in the cards
Fate is pulling you miles away
And out of reach from me
But you're here in my heart
So who can stop me if I decide
That you're my destiny?

What if we rewrite the stars?
Say you were made to be mine
Nothing could keep us apart
You'd be the one I was meant to find
It's up to you, and it's up to me
No one can say what we get to be
So why don't we rewrite the stars?
Maybe the world could be ours
Tonight

You think it's easy
You think I don't want to run to you
But there are mountains
And there are doors that we can't walk through
I know you're wondering why
Because we're able to be
Just you and me
Within these walls
But when we go outside
You're going to wake up and see that it was hopeless after all

No one can rewrite the stars
How can you say you'll be mine?
Everything keeps us apart
And I'm not the one you were meant to find
It's not up to you
It's not up to me
When everyone tells us what we can be
How can we rewrite the stars?
Say that the world can be ours
Tonight

All I want is to fly with you
All I want is to fall with you
So just give me all of you

It feels impossible (it's not impossible)
Is it impossible?

Say that it's possible

How do we rewrite the stars?
Say you were made to be mine?
Nothing can keep us apart
'Cause you are the one I was meant to find
It's up to you
And it's up to me
No one can say what we get to be
And why don't we rewrite the stars?
Changing the world to be ours

You know I want you
It's not a secret I try to hide
But I can't have you
We're bound to break and my hands are tied.

As she finished she leaned her head back, a few tears slipping from her eyes. I suddenly felt protective. I was already out of my suit, and I jumped out and ran up to her and hugged her.

"Why are you crying?" I asked.

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Fontaine's pov:

Suddenly, I got the fright of my life. Finn, the boy who had just been on my mind, leapt out from behind a rock and hugged me. Excuse me while I go die.

"Why are you crying?" He asked. He looked very concerned and I felt myself melting on the inside. But even if I have a crush I still have my common sense.

"Before I answer that, why are you here? Did you follow me? Are you gonna capture me? Did you tell your crew we were here?" I said glaring at him.

Instead of answering, he laughed. "No, no, and no!" He smirked. "I was trying to see what you thought of my gift, but instead you lie to your mom and hide in a cave singing and balling your eyes out! So, now you answer my questions. Do you like the necklace, and why are you crying?"

I wanted to tell him. But I couldn't. I know it's weird but how exactly would you explain to him you have a crush and are terrified of how disappointed you'd make your family?

"I'm crying because that's my best friend favourite song, an
Yes I like your necklace. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to now."
I said rolling my eyes.

My family would disown me if I fell in love with this guy! I kept staring at him and he realised and smirked, so I tried to turn it into a glare. Then I got up to leave.

Finn grabbed hold of my arm. "Wait! Will you go for a swim with me? We could play guitar together?" He asked, scratch that, begged.

"In your dreams Pirate boy." I retorted.

"Every night Fontaine." He smirked back, completely nonplussed.

I blushed and stopped dead in my tracks. Seriously he was gonna kill me! I tried to control my head, but I was beyond help now.

So as I jumped into the rover I replied  "If you can convince your dad to leave us alone for a week, I'll play guitar with you."

Finn jumped around in victory. "Okay!" He replied.

I drove off in the rover before anything else could happen. As I got back in the aronax, I felt happier than I had in a while. Ant seemed to notice this, and kept pestering me. But I was to happy to not be bothered by ant. As I went to sleep, I held the note that Finn gave me.

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