Peter pan's lost girls

well hell

this is my first time writing a story on here and i wanted to start with a good classic . so i choosed peter pan because he seamed like a good choose. but i put it in my point of view , instaid of wendy and her brothers going to never land it is a girl and her 6 .but in this twist peter pan kiddnapped them for him and his lost boys .they woke up on shore to find peter and his friends . they thought they found help but they where traped on a island of horror.the boys don't know anything about girls but all they know is that they want them for there needs and wants ,so they inprison them in never land for ever.
you will have to read the rest in the story.

(before they woke up on the magical island)
no one pov.
it was in the middle of the night and this seven girls where having a slumber party. they where sleep when all of a suden the window open and a hovering shadow came in and toke them away to the never land. one by one.

Angel pov.

my head feels like a fucking train hit it. I slowly got up and looked around. I must be dreaming because,the last part I remember was going to bed and falling to sleep. "no sweetheart your not "said a voice in my head. I roll my eyes and asked why are you still in my head .

"will it simple am apart of you and if something is apart of something it's not really easy to get ride of it "it said. i can feel it smirking in my head.

I started to walk on the shore while looking at the sea. I must be on a island. I wonder how I got here.then I heard a sound.

"who's out there,show yourself" I say putting my hands on my hips. then I hear voices. but it didn't sound like the same voice.

"it's not me dumass its coming from over there"it said will laughing. oh while i didn't know

"look peter's girl is up"one voice said. did he just call me a thing. "I see why he choose her" said a nother .oh hell to the no .I know they aren't talking about my body like that. "If you got something to say,say it in my face" I say putting my hands on my hips with rage.

It was all silent tell I heard movement. Then a boy in a Fox suit came out with a smirk on his face."hello" he says looking at me up and down. Perv. "it would be good if you tell me ya name " he ask looking at me with boardam. "How Ya get here" he says looking down at the forest.

"Well me and my friend where sleep and"-" omg my friends, were are my friends "I asked worried out of my mind.

He just rolled his" what are ya bland or something there right there" he said lookin down the shore. I look that way and almost cryed in joy. "Oh thank God" I say running to them.

"Girls Girls wake up" I say shaking them . They sayed no ,think,think,think, OH i got it . "the cops are coming to take away are money and house " I say all panicking like my little paris when she loses her doll.

"What "yelled 3 of them lift to right.my other girls are still asleep. i couldn't hold it in any longer . i bust out in laughter .They turned to me with a big a frown

"I lied" I say smiling at them. They started to throw stuff of the beach at me. They yelled "why you lied" at me. After they stop have their mad fit they looked around. "Where are we" asked amanda.

"Your in never land" said a voice. We all turned to see a guy in green, that boy from earlier,and some other boys.I totally forgot about them. "they can help us "i mind linked to the girls . they agreed with me.

"Oh really " said one of my girls. My last 3 girls are finely getting up."so who are you guys" I asked with a eyeing them down with curiostiy.

"Names Peter pan and this is my second in command slightly, then there is nibs,curly,the twins,and toddles"he says looking at them proudly.

"come on tell us your names so we can go back to the hind out " asked curly he said in a mean tone. Rude much. "Well we don't have all day" he says with a annoyed look. What a cranky butt.

"Well am Angel and my second in command is Amanda, then I have Paris ,Anne,The twins,and Amber"I say with a smile trying so hard to be nice.

"now that we know one another let's go back to the hide out" slightly staring at Amanda like a owl ." and why do we have to go with you "I said with pride.

They looked at me like i was a alien. i felt a stinging feeling on my chick and i started to cry but i healed it in . i looked up to found out that peter was the one who slaped me . "boys grib your girls and go to the hide out when we get there we are going to set some ground rules before we get comfy and if they disobey you ,you have to give them a punisment do i make myself clear"he said looking at them .

"yes sir" they said walking and gribing the girls arms . they girls protest aginst this and fighted back but the boys easly nocked them out with a speacial powder then they where out like a light . the last thought i had was the one no could answer.
what have we got ourselfs into

(i know it is shart but if i get some votes and ideas i will promise and be happy to make them longer . thanks for thaking your time and looking at it. i also but its just one chapter but i could write more if yell like)^o^.

p.s.please vote and give ideas it would make my day.