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|The wind became violent and loud,till all three kittens curled under Daisy.The box flew from on top of them and the kittens squealed "M-mother" Emerald said "Whats happening?" He asked " Stay close to Mother-Cat, everything will be ok!" Daisy called from over the wind "Stay close to me!we must find shelter!" She said|
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Ok, really Daisy? How hard is it to answer Emeralds question? stop trying to act so dramatic!
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| Shade and her brothers dusted as much dirt, dust and soil onto their mother-cat as they could, then left|
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*Slow claps* 👏 Bravo!....Not. *Sigh* Ok, what do i even say? Where's the crying? The grief? And forget that, where is the respect?! Like seriously? " They dusted as much dirt onto her as they could THEN LEFT?!" Just like that? Thats it? It's hard to believe Shade when she won't stop saying how much " She misses mother cat" throughout the intire book. Really everyone. Just look back at that scene right there. And them dusting the most dirt they could, in the city, means like, they just sprinkled dead leaves and maybe dust and pollen on her. I'm sure Daisies feeling the love...Yeah........
...No.
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Ok, that's all from the prologue of SHADE BOOK 1!
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Re-reading through "SHADE; book 1"
De TodoI read through each chapter after i write it. But now that i finished book 1 of "SHADE" I am reading through it just to edit it. And this is just my reaction to parts in SHADE. Because i did forget some parts, so re-reading is fun!
