Hey Guys Back with a Drabble Which I wrote for a Contest and All Thanks to u guys got the runner up .Thanks Chutki for this contest HeartlessHeart234 and Everyone Out Their Who Dropped Their Reviews I am Overwhelmed Dedicating this to You Guys Down I have Added Some of Your Reviews Because Honestly I Loved Each One of them and Myru That Message It was Amazing !!
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She lays there under Him with Her eyes closed Her head bend down as He strips Her away layer-by-layer Herself worth, Her soul rips away there was nothing more left to be taken.Her eyelashes flutters open in agony to find those evil orbs filled with lust & desire A sinister smile plays on His lips . She sighs Her lips quiver but a tear drop refuses to fall it had dried up long back..He smirks as She whimpers in pain .
She winces as He digs his nails onto her skin He smirks .An unknown rage unknown strength passes emits from Her body Her eyes fills in rage & disgust as She fights against him The aggressive orbs meets the feared orbs of His as She shoves a knife into His abdomen ..She lets out a sadistic laugh as he falls on His knees ...She walks forward .. She turns around to look at The Man & The Place where Her soul was crushed into pieces bit by bit ,A Toy , to satisfy His needs ..She blinks twice in pride as She steps out of The Cage .
She looks at Her reflection as the water cascades down her tresses to her bruised arms & legs ..She traces through Her scars ..Her hairs disheveled big bulky eyes ..She is emotionally & physically drained She falls on Her knees as She cries out loudly Her throat & Her soul pierces in her shouts as She finally lets out her agony mix through The waters completely taking it away with the flowing waters.
The Girl She used to be once resides in Her ..Finally She frees removing the Heart Lock as She smiles brightly looking up at The Dark Sky which bathes Her in its Glory. A New Beginning A New Life to Start.
"Aruuuuuuu cheers to ur winnn sweetheart .From the whacking queen to the beautiful Cinderella .U've thrown ounces of feminism in all of ur fics.
I'm so proud of u for not only bringing a dashing dabang zo but also the strong and bold version of yours.Now words can describe the happiness i feel when i see zo showing the right path to all (thru her famous smacks).
Stay blessed sweetie and continue giving us (especially me) the smacky wacky zooo !!.Loads of love,huggies n regards to u keep writing keep killing the monotonic beat
Love u againnnnn darling.
And yes a big congrats for ur winnnnn.Now common be a gud girl and gimme a partyyy''
Myru I Was Speechless When I Saw This All I Could Say Is I Love You Too Behna !!
and this comment
"Aruuuuuu it wasss amazinggggggg aruuuuu
Omgggggggg the way u described everything awwwwwwwww
Lovelyyyyyyyy I'm so much in love with this feministic approach of yoursFrom whacky cindrella to this fighter girl Truly dude i jzzzz drool over the protagonists of ir ficssss All fierce all outspoken
Dats like my girl my aru "
Why So sweet Myru ?
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Tasooo My Tom as I Call You When I told I got this I Could Remember How Happy You were At Times You always make me feel we both are long lost sisters My Tom I Love you and I Love Your Comments More than You always brings a smile on my face*smiling sheepishly * tasnimrodela
"This one broke my heart. But somewhere in between reading this, I felt proud for that girl. She endured so much..for so long. She was abused, tortured and raped. Her soul was ripped away. Her self respect got churn away under the feet of that monster. She was left with nothing, but a little confidence. The confidence that evoked the kind of desire to fight back. And she did. She fought against that monster.Finally freeing herself from the clutches of him, she stepped into a new life, where everything she deserved waited for her.You managed to describe so much with this. Beautiful. ❤"
Love you My Little Tommy for such an elaborating review when I wrote this honestly i never knew it will has so much depth in meaning !!
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Rumi cuteangelzaya Hayee Your comments Brings a Smile on My Face Always Love u Rumi
"Haye Allah! what a story! Like legit I love your plots like so much and this one got me in tears with her! Woahhh"
"It was really a heart touching story I could feel. My heart broke reading it poor soul was so broken but was finally freed from that devil who tore her apart .She stood up for herself and killed that monster it was really courageous thing she did . The emotions she felt after killing him the pain she felt she gone through touched my heart. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Finally she was out from his clutches she was free she could leave her life .It was awesome and heart wrenching ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I loved it dear"
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Thanks rikara94 Joythi Didu Thank you for this one U Know how much I Love u ?!!
" its amazing yar Really heart wrenching Just loved the way you penned down"
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I Hope those Who haven't read loves this !! Does Anyone wants me to continue this ?
