Black Crows

October night

It was so dark October night, that nobody would see the beauty of this town. And there actually was a lot to see at. This place was like a Garden of Eden at day. The nature was really colorful this time of year. The trees looked like red-haired girls whose hair interlaced and sparkled in the sun all the shades of red, yellow and orange. However, the night was really frightening. The wind was blowing and dogs were barking. Despite the sunny day, the night was frostily cold. Everything looked like a nightmare and I would not want anyone to be there alone. Nevertheless, that is where our story begins.

A young beautiful Anne was going home along her usual path. She was impressed by the concert she had just attended. This beautiful and refined soul was sure that nothing could aggravate her mood. Slightly tired, she walked, remembering this evening. Her eyes were shining with happiness and cheeks were red like roses. Anne turned into her street and was glad when she saw her house at the end of the street.

The leaves rustled rumbling, and the dogs continued to bark somewhere behind her. She took a look, there was a nook, but there was no dog. A huge black crow flew out of nowhere. This big beastly bird bawled. It lightly touched the young girl and disappeared into the darkness of the night. But nothing could frighten our heroine, Anne was really adventurous, she threw out of her head all the fears and continued going.

Unexpectedly, a light bulb exploded near her, causing her to scream. The street plunged into total darkness. Anne froze, shackled with horror. A flock of crows swirled over her head. They were everywhere and attacked the girl from all sides. Anne started screaming; she weakened and fell on her knees. There was only one thought in her head "this is the end".

Her head was breaking from the noise of birds, her whole body was shackled. The crows began to pull the girl, lifting her to the sky. Anne thought that she heard a friendly voice. It said painfully familiar "Anne", and she fell sharply to the ground. It seemed that centuries had passed before she could open her eyes. The girl saw Alex, her neighbor. She threw herself at him with hugs, she tried to tell him everything that had happened to her. She was in a terrible panic. Alex reassured her, he forced Anne to look around. And after she had done this, the cold ran through her body. The street was completely ordinary, the lamp was lightening, and the night was unusually quiet.

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Love, Tanya W.