After Midnight- Baekhyun

please read this

ok, so i just have a few things to say. i see a lot of comments saying that things move too fast in this story, or how it is weird the girl becomes the gf of some guy she doesnt know and all those great comments and what not.
i wrote this story almost 4 years ago. its not perfect and ive tried updating it and stuff to make the plot not super sped up but my writing doesnt work like that. i get that things move really fast throughout the story but if you see that tons of people point it out constantly, dont comment telling me things move too fast. i get it. i cant change it, thats how i wrote it in the first place. i made them talk through text so she somewhat knows him and at least is also interested in him, so please just spare me the fact that it still moves to fast.
im not calling any specific person out because so many people do it. i dont want to sound like a bitch either because im not trying to do that. i am just tired of trying to improve my work and write actually half decent stories that no one even reads on here, and they go to this crappy story i wrote 4 years ago and think, wow this story moves too fast and she kills all my favorite members and i hate thats shes doing that but ill comment so she knows i hate it even though she cant change it unless she re-writes the whole story and plot.
please just check out my other stories. deception is probably the best thing ive ever written and literally no one reads it. kyungsoo is a precious child and while he isnt that in this book or the other one, give him some fucking love.
its hard not writing about baekhyun and other popular idols like jungkook or jackson because when you write about less popular idols literally no one cares. i love all of those idols but you guys need to understand the other ones need that love too. its not just about bts or exo, theres so many other great groups out there that arent popular but are just as good.
im sorry about ranting this but it has just been playing on my mind ever since i wrote this book and actually got feedback. just please, all i want you guys to do is support your fellow wattpad writers, show them some love. if it sounds like someone will get offended by your comment or upset about it, just dont post it. a good job every once in a while makes authors so happy. also, give some under appreciated idols some love. some authors on here make amazing stories about them and dont get enough credit.
also, just check out some other groups, they all deserve love and are so talented.
thanks if any of you guys actually read this, and i appreciate everyone that has shown this book love. i never thought it would actually make it this far. if any of you ever want to chat or wrote something and need someone to read it, dont hesitate to message me. i love reading your guys books and stuff. and please dont think im coming off as mean, i just want to share my troubles and hope things go well from now on. also, im writing a new taeyong from nct x reader vampire book soon that hopefully doesnt suck as much as this one (haha get it, vampires suck) ok uhhhh bye 💕