My Deku means fear [discontinued]

USJ went wrong

Today is the day. He will come to the USJ. Not just his sensei, but also Tomura is thrilled. They have a chance to fight All Might. They prepared very well, it's now just a matter of waiting.

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The class was thrilled. Of course they would be. A pro-hero called Thirteen would teach them. Uraraka herself was at least as thrilled as the others. The student hero's gathered in front of the bus and entered soon after. When they got out of the bus they went inside the USJ where thirteen was waiting. After his explanation of what the Unforseen Simulation Joint is the lights went out and the fountain stops working. A black hole appears and  black fog appears out of it. The fog spreads and someone with blue hair and covered in hands appears, followed by many others. One black guy with an open skull appear. This along with the fog and hand guy seem different from the others. The students want to attack them under presumtion that the lesson already starten. Aizawa stopped them while putting his goggles on. He orders thirteen to protect the students while he goes to the villains and attacks them.

Most of the villains attacked Eraserhead, he fights them all, while keeping his eyes on the man producing the mist. He had to blink once, and it became fatal. The guy escaped and went to Thirteen and the students. "All Might should be here. Did the schedule change?" He asks. They don't react. But Bakugo and Kirishima attack the villain, hindering Thirteen. A dome of black fog surrounds them and warps a few students to the different places.

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Tomura is angry, not a little bit, but very angry. Angry at his master, angry at Kurogiri, angry at All Might and himself. He scratches his neck and chin. "Where? Where is he? He should be here." He says frustrated as he sees Eraserhead defeat the villains.

Kurogiri doesn't want to let any student get away. The pro-hero's may not be warned, or things will be complicated. But things already went wrong, All Might isn't here. Well, he just focuses on his task, while Thirteen tries to suck him up. He makes a gate and Thirteen turns himself into dust, but the students manage to distract Kurogiri and Ilda Tenya manages to run away, seeking help.

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Luckly they haven't noticed him. Midoriya would be in great trouble if either party found out. He was following a villain to a cafe when he heared of these plans and he rushed behind an electricity user through the gate. No one noticed him, he is sure. He has two empty notebooks with him and is writing things down as fast as he can. About the future hero's, but more about all the villains here. Making sketches of their look and observing their abilities. He does the same with the hero's in training. Due his new, but powerfull quirk he goes into Full Cowling and tries to be everywhere. He is so fast that no one notices him. It's just a matter of time till All Might comes and recognizes him. But he doesn't care.

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Bakugo and Kirishima finished fighting all the villains. Todoroki caught all the villains in ice. Exhausted, but alive; Tsuyu and Minata escaped. Yaoyorozu, Kaminari and Jiro are struggling with the enemy, wjile Tokoyami and Koda are taking every villain out. One by one.

The door of the USJ breaks and in the mist stands All Might. He is furious. He rescues Aizawa and gives him to the just arrived Shoto, Katsuki and Eijiro, ordering them to bring Eraser head to Thirteen.

At the same time Nomu comes to All Might and they exchange blows. (Everyone knows what happened this part, so I'm going to skip it.) Eventually, after 300 hits All Might defeats the Nomu and sends it flying through the ceiling.

With the help of Kurogiri Tomura appears in front of All Might, charging with his hand to his face. All Might doesnt know what to do, when a shot is fired through the arm of Shirigaki.

Ilda has returned with the pro hero's. Another shot shoots the remaining villain that was attacking Denki. Soon, most of the villains disappeared through the portals and a select few lower ranked villains remained at the crime scene. Ready to be arrested. The Nomu was found and a boy. He looked slim, too slim. He didn't say anything and looked down. He wears a blue hoodie with white markings. It looks old and its dusty. The boy was kept at the interrogation room in the UA, the principal, Nezu, wants to interrogate him and sends Aizawa and All Might in advance.
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Should I try a different writing style? And use POVs? Let me know how I can improve.

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