This story is being changed, i'm so sorry
thank you to those who voted and read and commented but considering i only put the prologue, i'm changing it. I really don't have passion for that story and i'm pretty sure my writing skills have changed and improved and my taste in books too so i really hope the next book which i will be starting soon will be good and you'll enjoy it more than this one
i don't expect too many people will be unhappy with this but yh sorry anyway