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This is my first time writing a book on here so expect it to be a little rough however if you have any ideas or improvement tips please comment them

I'm opened to learn and review

I'm gonna hopefully start updating once a week  and revising the chapters as I got I've republished the beginning and change a lot so please read the changes as I think it will be a lot better and more explained than the rough drafts .

Please enjoy!!

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