"Mine" by hellocheeky

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Okayyyyy

This took me 6 days to read.
But it was 6 days worth it.
First of all, the cover is beautiful.
Secondly, the prologue is like 🤩🤩
On a normal day, I wouldn't have read a book like that but if I had read the prologue, I definitely would have read it. Good job!
I love how you include so much detail and vary the use of words in this story but you didn't really give enough character to the uh....characters.
Did that make sense?
Probably not.
Also the chapters were hella long!
So it kind of made the book boringish. It would have been better if you left a cliffhanger at the end of each chapter rather than summing up everything into really long chapters but it's okay because the thrill of the story makes up for it.

Overall mighty well job.

Demi, the realest book reviewer you'll ever really meet.

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