The Abandoned House

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The Abandoned House is a story that is based off script my friend wrote for his GCSE coursework which was based off my own GSCE coursework that i edited as his orginal didnt have any real story and didnt really make sense( more on gory and comedy) so the idea in both script were my idea :).

I will be using the base story line (what there was off one lol) and will be a completely new story with a few edited exsiting story including the charachers (including some new). The oringal was set when i was at school so it will be set present day( with the charachers meeting up first time since they left school apart from Paul and Troy who are still good friends) I will also use elements from my own script as well.

This is my 2nd story (also done a joint merlin story with my Sis :) ) so i am improving but any comments would help.

Plot

When Paul and his friends meet up after 6 years everything is as normal as can be, everybody is the same they were back at school. But not all, as on their way home from a meal a house seems to appear from no where. It is realised that the house had alsoway been then but had been hidden by fog. The group decice unhappyly by some to invesigate the house in which they learn about the  strange history as well as the evil plan of a friend.

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