River
Waking up I notice I wasn't at the Boulder anymore, in fact I was in a Pitch black cave similar to the one I saw earlier.
What the Hell....
River: "ETHAN! SMILEY! YOU GUYS THERE??" I yelled, my voice bouncing on the cave walls.
I must of fell asleep
I shuffle for my satchel, taking out the carton of matches then lighting it, coming face to face with a Red Dragon and his now lit cigar sitting between his lips.
River: "AHHHHHH" I fell back into the dark ground.
Dragon: "Thanks for the lite" The Dragon's voice speaks deeply to me.
River: "Uh, no problem" I re-lit another match to find him gone
I shuffled my feet, walking towards the light opening in the cave continuing the journey despite the strange Dragon's appearance.
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After hours of climbing my forhead dripped with sweat, I find another boulder similar to the one before and plop down exhausted. My stomach growling loudly.
Boy am I hungry
After my short break in the rock, I soon begin walking again through what looks like a forrest in this mysterious valley continuing the search for my brothers.
A green bug, about the size of a seed bounces highly appears from the small forrest trail stopping towards me.
Bug "Heya stranger my name's Ted what's yers" The bug says.
River: "River Bone, nice to meet ya" I answered. It wasn't all that strange compared to the Dragon.
Ted: "Wow yer quite big stranger and pretty" The bug bounces back and forth.
I couldn't help but laugh.
River: "Haha you kind of look like a leaf a little bit" I joked with Ted but he didn't seem amused.
Ted: "Hey that's very insulting I'm gonna call my big brother"
Within seconds a giant bug, bigger then me that looks the same as ted appears from the trees and looks at me menacingly. I gulped a little startled by the bugs appearance.
Teds brother: "Is ya pickin' on my little brother ted, we don't need trouble makers like you in our valley little girl" he said sternly.
River: "Oh I'm sorry Ted I didn't mean to sound insulting" I said sounding apologetic.
Ted: "It's ok River you don't has to hit her if ya don't want to big brother" He nods to his brother, but still keeps his eye one me.
Teds brother: "Okays if you say so ted'
Teds brother: "Wat brings ya' here anyways stranger"
River: "I'm looking for my brothers so we can head back to our Home Village Bonneville"
Ted's brother: "Bonneville I've neva heard of it" he shakes his head.
River: "It's pretty far away from here" I said.
Teds brother: "Well ya better find it quick winters coming soon"
With that he walks straight from where he came, not saying another word.
Ted: "Sorry bout' my brother he's nice once ya get to know him" Ted bounces next to me again.
Ted: "Wells about now we gotta figger out what to do wit ya, OH! I know how's about I take ya to Thorn" Ted bounced up and down
Thorn She seems as beautiful as her name sounds I mean what??
River: "So Who's this Thorn Individual?" I asked curiosly.
Ted: "Oh she's this beautiful girl who lives in Barrelhaven and she's very smart she knows about every th' in the worl' " he answers.
River: "She sounds interesting, can she help me find my brothers?"
Ted: "Ya of course like I said she's very smart but remember what big brother said if you wants ta' go home better do it before winter hits quick"
River: "Don't worry I'm just gonna find my brothers then I'm outta here"I say. Not that this adventure hasn't been amazing or anything but Bonneville is the only home me Ethan & Smiley has ever known.
Ted began bouncing off the trail so I soon go-to follow him catch up, as we walk through the green forrest.
River: "Do you know where we can get something to drink?" I asked thirsty.
Ted: "We can stop by th' Barrelhaven Tavern they brews th' best stuff around" Ted says.
River: "Sounds like a plan" I smiled weakly.
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Nearby a bush 2 rat creatures are posted up by
Rat Creature 1: "Comrad! We're about to have a feast get your fat carcass up and get ready Behind the bush" The gray creature yells at his partner.
River: "I'm sure I'll eventual--" I was interrupted by two big creatures popping seemly out of a nearby bush staring at me intensely.
Rat Creature 1: "Hello tall human can you get in this bush for a minute so I can show you something?" He smiles flashing it's sharp teeth.
River: "Can you show me out here where I've got running space" I replied sarcastically to the creature.
Rat Creature 1: "No! No! Please your friend the dragon isn't around is he?"
Ted: "Your on yer own River!" Ted Bounces away quick leaving me to face the creature.
River: "Hey Ted where you going!" I yelled after him but he was long gone.
Rat Creature 1: "Comrad start cooking the fire!"
Rat Creature 2: "No! You called me fat!
River: "TED WAIT FOR ME!"
As I go to run the rat creature grabs me into the bush
Rat Creature 1: "Well well look who decided to join us....Comrad start cookin the fire!"
Rat Creature 2: "No you Called me Fat!" He snarks replying.
He stood sternly straight with his arms folded and his nose stuck up.
Rat Creature 1: "NO! WHAT DO YOU MEAN NO!" The gray creature shouted.
Rat Creature 2: "No, and it wasn't the first time either"
The Rat Creature face palms himself annoyed by his stubborn partner.
Rat Creature 1: "Look I'm sorry Comrad I wasn't thinking I was trying to catch dinner THIS ISN'T THE TIME!" He raises his voice.
Rat Creature 2: "Nope too late"
I take this as an opportunity to quickly escape from their grasp and heading straight to the woods.
I quickly found the trail me and Ted walked earlier and walked along it.
River: "TED! You out there!" I yell out to him getting no response back.
See a tree that looks like a suitable rest stop so I sit again it and check the map
Thee good news is that things couldn't possibly get any worse
Then a large plow of snow falls, covering the entire forrest. The air becoming thick and rigid.
I stand corrected....
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Bonneville [Bone Comic Re-written Version]
Fantasy[Based on the 1991 bone comics by Jeff Smith Re-written by me] (Name under rook1esoda was my old username) River, Ethan, and Ren "Smiley" Bone are all siblings and orphans from the Village of Bonneville named after it's past. Shortly after being thr...