10 years ago - 3rd person
In the middle of a snowy feild, 2 teenagers, (sence they don't age)
One, a 6'2 male, with shoulder long dark brown hair and wine red eyes, and another, a 5'7 female with waist length blue hair and sparkling golden eyes.They were holding hands, on both of their fingers was a ring, on the male, is a beautiful, silver and gold ring with a beautiful design engraved on it.
The female, has a silver ring with a sapphire gem to represent her hair, with gold flowers with diamonds in the center on the side and around the first half of the edge for her eyes.
The female also had another ring, on her left hand is a Yin and Yang ring
The male's name is Kaname Kuran,The female's name is Athena Valentine
(But with gold eyes, and this time she had no scar)
They looked in-each others eyes, remembering everything they can before they have to part.
"Please come back to me safe" said Kaname, looking into her eyes. "You know I always do." She said back with a small smile.
They both leaned forward at the same time, their lips touching for one last kiss before they part.
The kiss was like any other they shared, fireworks going on in their stomachs, spreading warmth into their untire bodies.
They recusantly pull apart to stare into each others eyes once more, before their hands unhooked themselves from each other, the female put het hood up, and turned around, leaving, knowing that if she stayed another second, she wouldn't want to leave.
Sorry that it's so short, and it was my first time in 3rd person, how did I do? Did i do okay? Also, this is a question to authors, how do you make you chapters longer? I mean no matter what I do they arn't long enough.
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