Episode 7 (Sharing feeling)

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Avni was busy in dancing with that man......but only interested in teasing neil......by showing him that he is not the only man left on this earth.

While Neil was dancing with the girl...who was way too much clinging to him.....and he was actually not liking it

So he left her on the dance floor.....with all the dignity.....and went back to the bar table....and had his drinks.

While avni continues to dance

Avni started losing her consciousness.......she was losing her balance and was falling on that man unintentionally.

But that man took it for the hints.....and started leaning more towards her...

Neil noticed Avni's condition

While everyone else including Riya and Ali were busy in dancing no one noticed her...except neil

Neil saw the man misbehaving with her.....taking the advantage of her drunk state

Being a man of humanity he cant see a girl being molested in front of him.......so he ran quickly beside avni.....to hold her

Neil : Avni....

Avni being in drunk state....cant make out whats happening....wa strembeling and imbalancing herself

Neil holding her from behind : Avni.....Avni sambhalo khud ko....kya kr rhi ho.....

The guy who was dancing with her interupted him "Hey you.....do u know her......leave her....she is mine for tonight"

Neil's eyes turned red with those words "If avni was not in this state......I swear i would have killed you at the place......Right now she is my priority.......
So if you dont wanna create a scene here.....please leave...before i do something.......LEAVE I SAID...."

The man got scared due to his words....and realising the occasion and the time.....he left silently....without looking back.

Neil continues to handle avni

"Avni....avni sambhalo khudko.....kisna kaha tha itni peene ko......when you cant handle it"

Avni in unconsiousness "N...n..neil....ahh....my head...my head.....pai.....paining........ahh"

Neil "Or bano sherni......

Neil looking around......ye..ye Riya kaha hai......uski frnd yha talli ho gyi......Ab main kya karu.....ab mujhe hi ise sambhalna hoga"

He carried her to the room....tbrough stairs

He reached the stairs.....giving her the support

But she fainted in the middle

Neil panicked "Avni....Avni aankhe kholo......avni kya hua tumhe.....Avni.....Avni open your eyes.......Ohh god....."

He carried her in his arms.....and took her to the room

He placed her on the bed

Neil in mind "Main iske liye pani lekar aata hu...."

The moment he turned...Avni held his hand "Ruko......kaha jaa rhe ho"

Neil again looked at her "Avni...tumhe hosh aa gya......ajeeb hai ye ladki......lagta hai wine ka jyada hi nasha ho gya ise...."

Neil to avni "Avni.....tumne bohot pee li hai....so better yhi hoga tum yha rest kro....or haa uthna mat yha se....."

With that he left the room to get some water

When he return back....he saw her sitting on the floor beside the bed....clutching her hands around her knees.......and crying silently

Neil noticed her.....keeping the glass of water aside.....he went and sat beside her
"Avni....tum..tum neeche kyu baithi ho.......or...or tum ro kyu rhi ho....."

Avni was sobbing
"Mujhe koi pyaar nhi krta......main akeli hu......i am all alone....."

Neil "Avni......ye tum kya keh rhi ho.....i think tumhe aaram krna chahiye....chlo utho....come on"

Avni "Nhi neil.......tum jao yha se....akela chodd do mujhe.....go from here.........bilkul vese hi jaise...jaise sab mujhe chod ke chale jaate hai...."

She was in deep pain....she looks happy outsode but from inside she feels all alone

Neil looks at her......till now he was taking this for granted....considiring it to be her drama........

But then he noticed the real pain in her words.........in her eyes

He saw some tears in her eyes....which were not coming out.....but were full of pain.....a hidden pain.

Neil "Avni...tum theek ho na....?"

Avni "Pta hai neil......jab main choti thi......to main stars ko kyu dekhti thi.....ki  shayad.....shayad inme se koi star mere mummy papa ho.......she said with a smile on her face.........shayd vo mujhe upar se dekh rhe ho.........
Maine unhe kabhi nhi dekha ......pr shyd vo mujhe dekh rhe honge......"

Neil got her pain......the feeling that she never shared with anyone.....she is sharing with him

Avni continues
"Bachpan se akeli rhi hu.......kabhi bhi koi shikayat nhi ki bhagwan se.......pr.....pr mujhe bhi dard hota hai......

She said with tears in her eyes

She looked at neil " Tum jante ho kaha dard hota hai........

She placed her hand on her heart......which is oviously on the right side not on the left.

"Yha....yha dard hota hai neil......bohot dard hota hai..."

Neil takes her hand and placed it on the left side "Avni....dil yha nhi....yha hota hai...."

Avni corrected him "Huh......bhagwan ne mujhe kuch bhi to perfect nhi diya life me
neil.....to dil kaise sahi jagah dete........Dil bhi galat jagah diya hai........

Mera heart left me nhi Right me hai ...."

Neil gets surprised.......an unknown fact about her......that hardly anyone knows

Neil : Avni.....tum akeli nhi ho...Tum to...Tum to bohot special ho.....tabhi to god ne tumhe special bnaya hai.......he said while cupping her face

Avni :Kyu....kyu neil.....kyu unhone mujhe koi apna nhi diya......kyu koi aisa insan nhi diya meri life me.....jise main.....Jise main apna keh saku...........she said in a low voice......full of pain in her words

Neil felt emotional listening to her

He realised the fact that........that he had everything in life.......still he always curses his life.....
He had so many people......his mom...his grandmother....his....his dad......still he didnt treat them well.

Realising avni's pain....he himself feeling guilty

Avni continues "Neil......mera naam.....Avni hai....bs Avni........koi pehchan nhi hai......pita ka naam nhi hai.......log mujhe....mujhe anaath kehte hai........anaath

Another tear rolled down her eyes

Tum btao neil....kya....kya naam ke saath sir name hona jaruri hai.....?

Kya humare pas pita ki pehchan hona jaruri hai .....?








To be continued......

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