Chapter 11

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(When Frisk is about to leave, the entire world was pitch-black making her very confused when she heard a voice)

Yohan: Why? Why did you let me go?

(Frisk turned around and saw Flowey again, without any cuts and he looks really confused)

Yohan: Don't you realize that being nice, just makes you get hurt? I mean, look at yourself. You made all these great friends, but now? You'll probably never see them again. And not to mention how much they've been set back by you. Hurt's doesn't it?

Zoe: Yeah, If I had just gone through without caring about any monsters, I wouldn't have to feel bad now. But at least they will do their best to find the way to destroy the barrier... that took about many years.

Yohan: Heh... true. But, I don't get it... If you really did everything the right way.. Why did things still end up like this? And is life... really that unfair? (pauses for few seconds when he found the solution) Say, kiddo.

(Frisk looks at Flowey)

Yohan: What if I told you, I knew some way to get you a better ending?

Zoe: A better ending? But... it was impossible to change back, it will take many tries to fix it.

Yoham: I know but as you see, humans have this red SOUL like yours, called "DETERMINATION."

(Frisk looks at her SOUL and it was really red)

Zoe: You mean, that you come to take my SOUL away?

Yohan: No no no, it's not like that. Your SOUL has a special power that allows yourself and your SOUL to persist after death, and you've had the most DETERMINATION I've ever seen in a long time. (giggles when coughing) Sorry, I always giggled everything.

Zoe: It's okay.

Yohan: But see, if you have more DETERMINATION than anyone else... You can keep going after death, and even you can change your fate. Just like savinh and loading a file in a video game! Heh, clichés always used every time. But I guess you're fortunate that so far, you haven't needed to use this power that you've avoided being killed for so long. What a waste! I bet you could had some fun, seeing different outcomes.

(Frisk is thinking about what he was saying)

Yohan: I wonder if you weren't already aware of this power and you've been deliberately NOT using it.

(Frisk realized about her DETERMINATION)

Zoe: So you are saying that I can teleport back when I meet Asgore before you appear?

Yohan: Why yes! That was true, because you can change everyone's fate for the better.

Zoe: Like I can go back to Hotlands to give the letter to Alphys, you know, Undyne gave it to me so that I can send it to her.

Yohan: Who knows... maybe she's is the key to the better ending. Well then... good luck kiddo.

Zoe: Thanks Flowey, I knew you have the changed heart.

Yohan: Heh... your welcome.

(Frisk holding her SOUL as when the entire show is going forwards very fast in high-pitched as the show resumed back to normal as Frisk was at the huge entrance that she remember of the part as before she meet Asgore)

Zoe: Now, I must get to Alphys in time.

(Frisk runs off as she is going back to Hotlands at the front entrance of Lab, she slides the letter to the door and knocking three times)

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