ok so i think I may have moved the story line along a bit too quickly in this one so I am going to scrap chapter three and do some editing on chapter two and hopefully that will make it better if not I may just scrap the whole thing anyway thanks for your patience with this one and I will try to fix it as soon as I can. please comment any thoughts or concerns you have about this story or the changes I plan to make. thanks!
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Alone In The Dark
Mystery / ThrillerI used to be normal. I used to have a normal life with normal friends, and a normal home and family but that was before everything changed. Before I was kidnapped by my so called best friend and brought here.