Senran Kagura: Path Towards Love or Despair Season 1

Thank you guys. 22k reads. Reason why I made this fanfic.

Wow I am super shocked that we made it this far and words alone can't express how thankful I am that you guys read this story. I'm super thankful that you guys enjoy this story despite it having grammar errors and typos, but still all in all I'm happy that you guys enjoy my story. Even though it's not the happy story that most people see within Senran Kagura fanfics. Reason why I wrote this book was because I barely saw any dark Senran Kagura fanfics out there so I decided why not make my own at first I was nervous seeing as how this was the second book I made but overtime I was surprised at how much people enjoy it. Heck even seeing the comments of the latest chapter blew me outta the water when seeing how far Yagyu has fallen and for Hibari she begins to show character development. While Katsuragi she consoled Lucian when he was thinking of committing suicide in which case I show her more kind hearted side. As for Asuka I'll have to work on it. So far Chapter 18's progress is incredibly slow since it's been coming back like sparks and not a tremendous bonfire like I would normally have.

Now I could end it here but how about I show you what I've developed so far? Think of it as something to be excited for, for when the chapter is fully complete.

Enjoy.

Yagyu's Sister: You left me there to die so tell me did you really love me or was that all just a complete lie? Tell me sister...Do...you...love...me?

Yagyu: Y-Yes I do! I do love you!

Yagyu's Sister: Then why did you replace me with her?

Yagyu: Replace you?

Yagyu's Sister: You replaced me with her...that pink haired girl...why? *sob* You care more about her than you do for me. *sob*

I went towards her but she stopped me from going any further.

Yagyu's Sister: Don't try to comfort me! I hate you Yagyu! You left me to die!

Behind her a ring of fire was formed trapping us both and I could see what the fire was doing to my sister's face it was melting from the intense amount of heat however it didn't bother her she only laughed wickedly.

Yagyu's Sister: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THIS IS A HEARTWARMING REUNION DON'T YOU THINK SO SISTER?

Not enough? Have a bit more

Kid Lucian: (But that's not a right thing to do, if I was to do that then I'd be no different than them.)

Lucian(?): (Sigh...allow me to tell you this...you kid have a good heart and soul but it's just not suited in this world. They'll take advantage of you...of your kindness and leave you to rot at that point you will feel empty however by exacting your revenge you would feel complete. Don't you want something earned back instead of nothing but pain? By receiving pain you can give the same people who hurt you. Your pain make them feel like they regret ever causing your suffering and the feeling you can get from delivering pain onto others is very fulfilling...tell me wouldn't you want that? The feeling of being complete?)

Kid Lucian:....

It as then Ikaruga began to shout pleading Lucian's child self to not give into the dark offer. However I realized what this is and it's best if I told her.

Ikaruga: Don't listen to him! Nothing good can come out of revenge! Lucian please listen to me!

Katsuragi: Ikaruga don't waste your breath.

Ikaruga: Huh?! What're you saying Katsuragi? We have to convince his child self not to gi-

Katsuragi: Ikaruga I don't think we can do anything want to know why? It's because this must be one of Lucian's memories and since we're seeing it we can't interfere. If we could we could've restrained those boys from hurting him...as much as I hate to say it but we have to let the memory continue to find out more.

Ikaruga looked at me with a look of uncertainty and disbelief but in the end she chose to accept it.

Ikaruga: *sigh* I suppose you're right.

That's it for that can't have too many spoilers now can we?

So for this part tell me what things you want me to focus on?

What do you like about the story?

What are it's strengths and weaknesses?

Any sort of feedback is useful thank you guys and until CHAPTER 18!