Hello everyone!!!
This is the first actual story i'm writing, i'm kinda new to this and would love to have your feedback. I'd love to know what i'm doing well, what not, and what i should change.
I have a plan for how this story is going to go so sadly i wont be asking for suggestions on what to write next.
Thank You All For Reading My Story, i hope to write more.

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Breaking Point
FantasyIn a small town west of Chicago a young kitsune by the name of Rox ( Roxy) is bullied as she tries to find an escape from her harassers Finally when given the opportunity everything goes wrong....or does it?