11:59 p.m.

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Joey : I'm getting on the train

Mom : Alright, text me when you've reach home

Joey : ok, love you mom

45 minutes later

Joey : Mom ? Are you still awake

Mom : yes honey ? Have you reached ?

Joey : mom the train hasn't stop for 50 minutes. It's suppose to reach Klang in 20 minutes

Joey : I'm scared mom

Mom : That's weird

Mom : Try asking someone

Joey : Thing  is, theres nobody here

Joey : The train's empty !

Mom : was there anyone in there before you got in?

Joey : Yes but they all disappeared !

Mom : What do you mean 'disappeared' ?

Joey : Vanish !

Joey : Vanish into thin air !

Mom : look around Joey. There has to be someone !

Joey : Theres no one but me , mom !

Mom : Alright, try asking the conductor

Joey : Theres no one controlling the train either

Joey : The train's going faster and faster mom

Joey : I'm scared

Joey : Am I going to die ?

Mom : Youre going to be fine honey. Try looking around. Are there any signs, any area you recognise, or do you know the train's number ?

Joey : I can only see trees, Theres no sign board and anything else.

Mom : Hold on, I'm contacting the Train Station Department

Joey : Mom ! The train's number is 6315

Mom : Great honey ! I'll tell them to locate where the train is now ! You're going to be fine !

5 minutes later

Mom : Joey, are you sure the train you're on is 6315?

Joey : Yes mom! I'm sure!

Joey : Did they locate the train is at already ?

Mom : They said train 6315 crashed in 1981. Its impossible that you're on that train

Joey : Mom! I'm scared

Joey : wait I see someone. Hold on , I'm going to ask her what's happening

Mom : Joey! No!

Mom : Run Joey! Run! Find a safe place and hide there until I find you

Mom : Joey!

Mom : Baby?! Are you there

Mom : Please reply me !

Joey : Go to hell

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Alright, this short story is called 11:59 the train crashed 11:50 and every once in 7 years, one person will be convinced that train 6315 is their waiting train. Victims who enters the train will die at 11:59 sharp before midnight strikes. And apparently, Joey was the unfortunate one. Rumours was that, the souls of dead passengers on train 6315 would strangle the victim and feed on it.

A whole load of  grammatical errors, I know. Please correct me , and please please please vote! Thanks for reading !

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