explanation // story outline

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hey so this story kind of doesn't make much sense with only ryan talking but i soldiered on anyway. here's like an explanation of what was happening?? it's taken straight from my notes:

ryan and brendon have a "healthy" relationship, meaning ryan lies all the time and brendon is oblivious. it's not actually healthy, it's real fuckin' toxic. the lies start out mundane but they end up getting bigger and bigger, first it's like ryan saying that he forgot to do something or that brendon looks great, but soon it turns into stuff like "i'm not cheating" and "i love you" and such. ok, me, let's get into the storyline.

side note these are horribly messy and i'm not sorry

they start fine / some bigger lies / brendon thinks ryan is cheating / he is, but not with the girl brendon shows / ryan gets interested in the girl brendon shows / he seeks her out / finds her at the bar / they have sex a few times / girl decides she doesn't want to be a side chick / ryan gets REAL upset / kills her accidentally or on purpose (not sure?) / he gets her blood on him / tells brendon it's his blood / is now paranoid / cops eventually find him / how long do killers spend in prison? if it's manslaughter?? however long that is / tries to convince brendon it's all fake / goes to jail / how to end??

DON'T FEEL BAD FOR RY HE IS A BAD BAD MAN IN THIS STORY I REPEAT: NO SYMPATHY!!!

lemme get on that RESEARCH B
ok:
second degree murder = life
first degree murder = life
manslaughter is determined by state so let's say they're in cali = 3 to 20 years (damn)
we'll make it a ten year sentence i don't know shit about prison

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