The karate kid Daniel

Chapter one Something new

Authors note:hi guys this is my first story ever so please no rude comments but sense this is my first story can u guys give my so pointers:)?. So I like long books so if u guys want short or long stories so if u want to comment so thanks he's my very first chapter and thanks for just noticing this story now story time.

(Carley's P.O.V.)

"Carley up time to go to work come on"Mr.Miyagi said but in a nice way "ok ok I'm up I'm up"I said with my hands up in defense "ha that's the first time all summer I didn't have to pour ice cold water on you to get up"Miyagi said while chuckling "alright I get it I'll see ya in 20" I said more like 20 years but oh well I went into the bathroom got into the shower got out a while later then I blow dried my reddish light brown hair and curled it my hair went down to my mid back.i then put eyeliner and mascara I don't have to Put on lip stick cause my lips are naturally light red.I then put on my black and whit t-shirt not that said love on it and put on so light blue skinny jeans and my fav light pick high top converse.I looked in the mirror and noticed I have grown two inches over summer well then.

Now I'm 5'7 for a girl I'm kinda tall but I like it I got out of the bathroom to the kitchen were mr.m is handing me my favorite cereal raisin bran crunch.

*about 8 minutes later*

Me and mr.m are done with eating our food in comfortable silence."Carley how about instead of trimming bonsai trees you should go hang out with Freddy" "oh thanks mr.miyagi but I don't have to" I said with a smile"carley I insist you need to take a break from karate training for tournament" "ok thanks taking a break for a few hours does sound pretty nice thanks again" "welcome"is all he said.(look I know the tournament had only guys in it but I'm changing it up a little just to let you know.)

         A short ride to raceda to sooth seas apartments it went straight to Freddy's apartment 17 while mr.miyagi went to the repair men's office were he worked.

  I knocked on fred's door and less than a second the door opened and there was my dear best friend "hey car" I smiled about my nickname "hey Fred you wanna walk around hang out or something or do you still want me to teach you karate" "I pick karate and walking around" "ok then let's walk first k?" I said "sounds good to me".

"So there's gonna to be some new people moving into apartment 25" said Fred "well I hope one of them is 17 like us so we can have a new friend to hang out with and that apartment kinda sucks with the pool and sinks there not gonna be happy"I said.

   "Yea I bet so how's training going" "great unless your being rock back and forth standing on a row boat for balance by mr.miyagi I'd say terrific if the water wasn't cold but it's funnier than you think it would be" I said while laughing."well that actually sounds fun so you wanna go to a beach party with the guys tomorrow" Fred said while winking at me"ok fine I got four months left till the tournament" "great"  "hey Fred do you think that lady is the new guys" "I think so" "well I'm gonna say hi come with me cause I'm a little scared"i said "ha ok oh car here's your glasses I told you I could fix them dark blue nerdy glasses up" "oh ha ha very funny but thank you I couldn't stand another day of blurry vision". We then walked up to the lady and said at the same time"hi u must be the lady moving into apartment 25 right"all she did was laugh by how exactly the same me and Fred said that "well yes me and my son Daniel are by the way I'm lucel larusso"she said shaking our hands then she looked me in the eye and said"my son Daniel is 17 and he mite need some help from a lovely girl around his age?" "Yea I'm 17 and I love helping out people  and I get what your saying and i work here to help my friend the repair man that works here"I said "oh and I'm Freddy I live in apartment 17 nice to met you me and my friend carley here are gonna help your son.....bye".

   Me and Freddy walked to the little gate were Lucel walked out of when the gate was kicked opened and Freddy got hit by it while the boy that kicked the gate open had a bike and a bag.So me and the boy I'm guessing Daniel help Freddy get back up but I was trying to hold back my laughter.

  Then Freddy introduced him self then Daniel told him his name and he's the one that's moving into the old apartment building.Then Freddy came over to and I'm standing here thinking I'm about to laugh my butt off.

"Carley James do you have any laughter your holding back and have you noticed what shirt I'm wearing?" I then gave him a confused look then I looked at his shirt and it said (making beacon) and it showed a boy pig and a girl pig in cartoon form "mating" right then I busted up laughing and I laid on the floor laughing a while.I got up and finally said "sorry about that I'm Carley James nice to meet you"then I shook his hand and I had tingles all the way up my arm.

  And I finally looked up into his amazing eyes but I noticed that he is a actor in one of my favorite movie the outsiders.I feel like I going to fan girl I guess I'm going to.

        SORTA A CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!:}