Bumbleby, Book 1

The dramatic stuff

Lets admit it: I DON'T KNOW HOW TO END A CHAPTER. So, i am making this twice as long. 

Anyway, i have the whole story already written out, and it's mostly just fluff until a special point way later in the story 😉. So anyway, notes at the end. 

(Ps. Vote if you want me to keep doing the recap things at the end of these notes.)

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RECAP: 

"Well, I'm not going with him to the dance," Yang calmed down. "but I am going with him on a date next week. Why are you asking?"

Yang prayed to lord Oum that her eyes wouldn't change color. That her eyes weren't going to spill out tears, that she would not think about how to kill Sun in a week.

Unfortunately, bad luck runs in the family. (Get the reference?)

Her temperature went up. Her eyes swirled with red and lilac. The two colors dancing with one another. "Yang? are you ok?" Blake asked with some concern in her voice.

"me? um- Yeah! totally. Why?" Wow, great job! you made a fool of yourself again Yang! After that she tried to slap on a smile.

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Main plot story-thing:

"Because a) Your hair is starting to get that glow when your semblance kicks in," 

"b), your eyes are just begging to change color,"

"And c), You just burned the 5th rug this week." Blake sighed.

 "Nope! I'm fine! Totally as cool as ever!" Yang grinned at her pun. But Blake still knew she was hiding something. She never acts like this. Blake decided to press on her point. 

"Do you dislike Sun?" It was at this point Blake realized, shouldn't have. She rug turned to ink black charcoal at the name, and Yang's eyes were a violent red.

Why would she dislike Sun? Blake realized at that point that maybe, just maybe, if she figured it out she could help Yang calm down. But how? you c-

"Whatever. This is stupid. I'm out." Yang declared, standing up from the crumbly black charcoal,  trotting out the door, and slamming it shut with a thundering clap.

***The gym.***

Yang's best motivation for training is to pretend the punching bag is a grimm, or something like that. But at this time, Yang's motivation is pretending the punching bag is someone.

"Why the frickly-frack would Blake ever take a liking to the scum-bag he is!" Yang punched and knocked over the punching bag. Smirking angerly, Not just at what she did, but at her pun that she used.

Even while she's angry she makes amazing puns.

***Combat Class***

"And the final victor is Sun Wukong!" Mr Wheat announced to which everyone clapped. No matter how annoying Sun can be, he was a exceptional fighter, he had peoples respect.

"Now, who's ready to fight the victor?" Mr. Wheat challenged. Yang's had flew up to the air so fast it probably could've made it to mars and back. "Alright y then, Miss Xaio long," 

Yang smirked as she got up and walked by some students, trembling slightly just by her stare. She was angry, and no one liked her when she was angry. She stepped onto the small fighting arina that they fought on occasionally. "YANG XAIO LONG VS. SUN WUKONG!"

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Okay, so I wrote this one double as long as the first... and  yeah! The basic things you read everywhere, (Hope you enjoyed, etc.) 

Constructive criticism is welcome, as well as just plain criticism, (if your that kinda person) 

Tell me a schedule you want me to update at, like, I update every Wednesday, or whatever you gals/guys want.

Crabby, out. *drops mic.*