You guys need to understand how much I hate this,
"Daddy" I yell out
"Buddy where are you?" my dad yells/asks
"I'm over here" I yell but I don't hear my dad reply but I did hear a loud bang, then I find my dad lying on the ground, his blood everywhere.
"Buddy go find mommy *cough* and take care of her*cough* and your sister"
"Okay daddy"
"I love you *cough* buddy but daddy's *cough* got to go now *cough*"
"No daddy you can't m-mommy and sissy need y-you I-I need y-you" I full on crying
"Damien *cough* go *cough* find *cough* your *cough* mother *cough* now *cough cough*"
"I love you daddy"
"I *cough* love *cough* you *cough* too *cough* buddy *cough*"
I hug my dad for the last time and go find my mom.
Like it's so baddd
But I don't know how to change it to make it good