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She felt very shock when a hand suddenly slap her hard and pull her hair strongly. She suddenly stand and a loud shout hurt her eardrums. Her cousin shouted at her for being lazy and staying asleep all day. While eating dinner she tell her plans to her aunt but she disagreed. In the morning she finished all her works at exactly 8:00.While eating breakfast she repeat what she've said last night and beg for it but her aunt and her cousin is really heartless they don't let her. The mother and daughter lock her up in an abandoned stock room. She is making noise, knocking the door hard and shouting at the top of her lungs but still no one help her. She is crying and shouting every night. After 5 days they don't still open the door so being hungry made her into a mad man and whip the stooled chair on the door. The door broke so she manage to run away in no where.

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