FUTILE EFFORT

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PART-1

Hello people...i m back with the first part. Thank you to those who have commented....and silent readers plzz give your opinion also.

One more thing....guyz I forgot to tell you that Nikhil and Manshi in this story are not lovers...but brother and sister....so here we go with the first part.

The scene starts from Ragini asks Laksh/Abhimanyu to remove his shirt to see whether the mole which was on Laksh's body, is there on his body or not....while Abhi and Manshi oppose to it fearing that the truth may come out.

Abhimanyu/Laksh : What the hell....how can you ask me to remove my shirt???

Ragini : Why...what's your problem?? If you are really Abhimanyu then you don't have to worry right?

Abhimanyu/Laksh : You think whatever you want to....but I will not remove.

"You have to", comes a voice from behind.

Everyone turns and sees that Swara is coming with the inspector.

Abhimanyu/Laksh : What is this??? How can you enter my house with police?

Swara : Because we have permission from higher authorities that if we want to confirm our doubts without harming anyone then we can...inspector...

Swara signals the inspector to give the permission letter.

Inspector : Yes Mr. Abhimanyu....you have to do this.

Without any option he removes his shirt....but to everybody's shock and disappointment the mole is not there.

Abhimanyu/Laksh : I think now you guyz are satisfied that I am not any Laksh....plzzz now if you don't mind may I go to my room? I am feeling suffocated here.

He angrily turns...holds Manshi's hand and goes to their room.

Here seeing their plan failed Swara and Ragini are also broken...but somehow Swara consoles Ragini and send her back with other people to home....now only Swara and Sanskar are there outside Manshi's house.

Swara looks at Sanskar from the corner of her eyes. She can see disappointment on his face....disappointment of not being able to prove that Abhimanyu is Laksh....disappointment of not being able to bring a son back to his mother.

Swara(trying to talk) : Sanskar ye sab....

Before she can proceed further Sanskar interrupts and says....

Sanskar : Swara I think we have to go back to our work or Manshi may doubt us.

(Remember guyz Swasan are working in Manshi's house as household workers...Sanskar as chef and Swara as Mishka's caretaker).

Without uttering another word Sanskar goes to the nearby shop where they have kept their clothes....Swara alo silently follows him....after that they have put on their costumes and enter Manshi's house from back door.

Same day evening-

In Baadi, Annapurna gets a mild heart attack remembering Laksh's behaviour. Everyone panics and immediately call doctor. After examination the doctor says that she needs to calm down or else her health may get worse. Ragini calls Swara and asks her to bring Laksh as Annapurna is continuously blabbering Laksh's name.

Swara : Ok ok...Ragini....you plzz relax...nothing will happen to badi ma....i will do something.

Swara immediately tells Sanskar about badi ma's condition and asks what should they do. Sanskar goes to Laksh's/Abhimanyu's room but to his disappointment, Manshi is also there so he just asks him to come out.

Sanskar : Sir...can you plzz come ou? I think there is problm outside.

Abhimanyu : What problem?

Sanskar : I don't know sir.

Abhimanyu : Hmm....let's go.

As soon as they come out of the house Sanskar drags him to the car and closes the door.

Abhimanyu/Laksh : What are you doing? Leave me.

Sanskar doesn't say anything....he immediatelt removes his turban (marwadi turban) and his moustache. As soon as he removes those, Ahimanyu is shocked to see Sanskar there.

Abhimany(whispers) : Sanskar..

Sanskar tells about Annapurna's condition to Laksh and pleads him go to her atleast for once...Laksh denies thinking he is telling lie....but Sanskar immediately shows the vedio of Annapurna lying on bed with an oxigen mask on her face....after seesing that Laksh and Sanskar immediately rush to badi.

(The rest of the scene is like the show).

After meeting everyone and telling the truth...he is about to go from there...but suddenly he bumps into someone....and he is shocked to see the person there....

Person(shocked) : Abhimanyu...

Abhimanyu/Laksh : You...


Done with the first chapter. So what do you think....what will happen next? Well that I will tell in chapter 2...till then plzz read and if you like it don't forget to vote and comment...bye and take care.


Thank You,

Love,

Sunayana

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