suicides failure REWRITE

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   I wake up startled from hearing glass shatter on my door as my father starts to holler and scream. I hear him storm out the house after probably to head to a bar of some sort.
  I get an idea many would get say it's a terrible one but I really don't care anymore. I go into the living room and find a fountain pen and a sheet of lined paper and begin to write.

  Dear anyone who actually gives a fuck,

I left you and you know what, I don't care about you because well, you never gave I shit about ME, and don't lie to yourself about how you wished it could be different because it's over and done with. Just know you caused this you know you don't care you just act like it just like an actor in a play hoping no one notices your sorrows.

I hope your life sucks and you burn because you made me become to far gone

~Sue

   I leave the note laid out for my father and left. I walked out the back porch and into the forest. As I'm walking I hear rustling in the trees. I pay no mind, it's probably an animal and even if it weren't what's the worst that could happen, it'll kill me. As I head deeper into the forest I arrive at a cliff over looking a valley with trees and mountain range behind. I take a deep breath before sighing on the edge admiring the view for a minute before hearing a twig snap. I know someone's behind me but if they are hear to make sure I'm dead they won't mind. I then push my dangling legs into the cliff causing me to fall. As I'm falling I feel a hand grab my arm. I try to thrash around hoping they'll just let go but they pull me up. I look at them but before I can get a good look at them I start to brake down crying  not wanting to be here. I'm suddenly engulfed in warmth from a hug, this person must be a man by their body build. The man began to rub my back while trying to get me to calm down but all I can do is mutter "why...why did you save me" he simply just says in a low tone "because you don't deserve this, you deserve so much more" I lean into his chest as he rocks on his heels making me fall asleep.
  I wake up in the man's arms seeing that he has a mask, it's blue with pitch black circles dripping with tar. He looks down at me "I see your awake, it's late I'll take you to my house and don't worry I've seen you around school you seen like a cool kid and my buddies think so to, are you up for it" I hesitate but nod I didn't have much where else to go really. " Are you able to walk? " "ya sorry for the trouble" he just shrugs it off and leads me through a forest. We stop at an abandoned like mansion. I stop for a moment and the man looks back "what's wrong" I began to shake my head and smile "it's nothing I just realized I never got your name" "oh right I'm sorry I'm Jack but it's fine if you'd rather call me EJ either works" I nod and we walk into the huge mansion.
   Inside there is a gorgeous living room with two sofas, a big arm chair, two bean bags, and a large flat screen tv. Beside the dining room was a set of wooden stairs with a velvet colored carpet rolled on it. Their was a kitchen on the other side of the stairs with all sorts of cabinets and draws, a fridge, oven normal kitchen stuff but there was this huge dining table that could seat about thirty people. I didn't see anyone though so I guessed Jack's friends weren't home. Jack looks at me "Hey I need to take you to see someone" he then begins to pull me up the stairs to a big oak door.