Jacks view
"Well jacky its nice seeing you buuuut I've got some business to tend to sooo ya see ya" as she says this she starts to walk off. Im still in quite a shock so it takes me a minute to realize. I need to tell Slender that she's back.... I think?
Sues/??? view
After seeing jacky freak I cant seem to stop giggling. I hope sue stays asleep alittle longer now. I need to end the bastard. He hury me.... He hurt sue...... He broke me..... He killed me. But that will all change tonight i will finish what i started I will ..I will ..I will end the imposter and report back to daddy.
After walking through the beautifully eerie woods that i grew to love. I finally reach the house where the imposter lived..... The man who was said to be are father.
I walked inside to see the asshole drunk and pissed. He looked at me and sue seemed to be waking up no no this can't happen shit.
Sues view
I opened my eyes to see my father. Are eyes interlocking as we just stayed silent. Sadly this only lasted for a minute because then all i heard was "BITCH WHAT THE FUCK TOOK YOU SO LONG GOD DAMIT JUST GO TO YOUR ROOM YOU USLESS WHORE" as he loudly slurred this I couldnt take it. I snapped. "How dare you" i said he seemed puzzled so i said it a little louder "How dare you" until i started screaming "HOW FUCKING DARE YOU" "HOW DARE YOU YOU SON OF A BITCH" my voice had started to come demonic its over. I ran passed him and grabbed my sister old knife. It use to be off limits since well my moms blood was on it but ya know I dont really care. I ran at full speed toward my father with the huge knife and stabbing him in the ribs. Blood the blood was everywhere it was so beautiful. He began to scream when I bent down and giggled in his ear before whispering "Im sorry sir but im afraid you to far gone" I then slit his body open like a surgeon does to his patient. I started to tale the organs out playing with the intestines it was like a huge bloody jump rope. I stared at the heart.... I wanna taste. I picked it up and took a huge bite out of it.... It was sooo sweet it had that slight salty taste yes but it made it have a sweetness I craved I need it. I saw a few other things i tried like the liver and lungs and they were okay but then I got to the kidneys. Oh my Zalgo I never had anything as good as a heart and kidney. The kidney had that sweetness like the heart but it was bitter in a good way. I finished my meal and broke the body into little piles just for fun.
As i was leaving all i could here was that childish giggle and i knew who it was. "Whats up Doll" "I guess you didnt need my help after all you even found a new favorite snack... Im proud of you" "heh thanks lets head back though im quite tired".
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suicides failure REWRITE
HorrorI looked at the original and saw how bad it was sooo here's a better version with a better plot to. It is however start off as very similar but it will be quite a bit different. Sue has had it pretty rough but what happens when she tries to die....i...
