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This is an old story I kinda forgot about till I had a dream last night that will not be talked about. So basically it was about these "greater beings" who weren't angels but weren't devils either, they don't exist in this world. They're also half human and animal. They can be formed with 2 animals lowest and 4 highest. They also used to be "judges of the dead" and eat souls who they deemed "unworthy", then they were like "we're too old for this shit" and stopped. So what I was going for was hybrids of humans and animals with wings. There was also like colonies or something, I also tried to use all kinds of languages with naming the characters. (I used Google translate so it probably isn't accurate). At the end I'm gonna say what changes I'm gonna make.
TRIGGER WARNING: implied rape.
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My name's Chihiro Iki,I'm a 24 year old angel of the eirinistís colony, I just became a royal advisory for our council. i'm hard at work filling out and signing papers when
there's a knock st my door 'it's late, who could that be?' i think to myself. i grabe a bat i keep here for 'just in case' reasons, and go to the door, when i open it, it
was a friend of mine, ash. "chihiro, i didn't think you'd answer, are you busy?" "not really, what did you want?" "i just wanted to talk is all". Without thinking twice,
i let him in. We sit in the living room and start to talk, "so..you and Agini still together?" "oh, no" "oh..what happened?" "it just..didn't work out". About an hour
passed, it was close to 12, i had work that needed to be done, i was about to ask him to leave when he spoke, "Chirhiro.." "yes?' "what i'm about to say and do, you're not
going to like.." "..what do you mean?" "Chihiro, i love you" he stands up and grabs my wrists, i look at him, dumbfounded, "and i want to do things to you" "ash, let me go"
i try to get away. "ash!" he starts to laugh "come on, dear, let's have some fun" "ash! no! let me go now!". what he said..and did next is something i'll never forget.
"struggling is futile, just cooperate" "why the hell should i!?" his wings came out, "dear, i'm a demon, do you really think you can take me without hurting and killing
people around us?" "..what?" "hehe..i'm Ashton, 25, demon of the diafthorá colony, and i'm the right hand man hun" "why are you telling me, out of all people!? have you
forgotton who i am here!?" "no, what i did forget is who much of a whiney bitch you are, now, dear, last chance, just come with me, or i'll make this worse"
"...the fuck do you want?" "to have some...'fun' with you". my wings came out, i used them to try and get away, it kinda worked, he let go, but then i somehow passed out.
*this is the part that no one needs to hear,so it has been left out* i start to cry again,1 "come now, dear, you got what you wanted, i got what i wanted, and we never have
to speak again" "what do you mean? how did i get what i want?" "you wanted a child, and now you'll have one" "not with you, and not like this! and what if i were to get
rid of this child!?" he looks at me with a look that made me shake a bit. "get rid of that child and your colony and people will pay for it!" "....why? why do you want
it alive so badly!?" "either it will grow to be a hell spawn, or you'll suffer 'cause it'll be killed, their father is a demon after all" i stay quiet "maybe one day i'll
return and see what our child has become" "......never come back here" "i'll come back if i want to, end of story! now, i'm returning to my colony, word will get out if you
do something to the child, and, Chihiro, you may want to get that work done" he leaves. he's right, i have to get that work done, i try to get up, but i fall asleep.
when i woke up, i forgot nothing of that night, 'great, that...happened and now i could lose my job!', i look at the time, '15 minutes..i can try'. i sit at my desk
and start writing like mad. 10 minutes passed, i had to get ready and leave, i can't be late, so i put all the papers in a bag, i didn't really have time to change, but
i tried to anyway. i only have 3-2 minutes to get there, my wings came out...still soar...i have to power through this, i fly to the council. when i get there i see that i'm
late, i take a deep breath and walk in. when i get to where i was supposed to be fucking 9 minutes ago, my co-worker comes over 'Iki! where were you!?" this got the attenion
of pretty well everyone in the room 'why do they have to be so damn loud?' i sigh "last night was just...a little rough.." "so you valu..'screwing around' more than work!?"
"that's not what i meant". dread goes through my body as i remember last night, i just want to work and try to forget the unforgettable, but they keep running their mounth,as
everyone in the room listens, "i outta report you to the queen and then she'll-" they were cut off but a powerful, yet calming voice "that's enough, dear" hearing that word
sends shivers down my spine, even though it's not him "oh, your majesty!" they bow, "i was just explaining something to Iki here that she shouldn't be 'messing around'
instead of working a-" once again cut off, "if Iki said she wasn't, then she wasn't, also, what does it matter to you if she was?" "well..umm..i..." "back to work, everyone,
please". we all get back to work, i don't why énkyros is always upset, whatever, it's not my problem. after work was over i walked home, bad idea i must say, i was jumping,
i thought everyone was ash, then i walked past a group of people, i hread his voice, so i turned the other way and flew. when i got home i locked the door and thought it'd
be best not to answer it at all. i was extermly tired, but had to do some work, after it was done i went to bed.~time skip, 4 months~ i was at work, feeling sick as hell,
i keep having to leave 'cause i keep throwing up, someone must have noticed, 'cause the queen called me to her station. "Iki, do you why you've been called here?" i thought
it was 'cause of that, but didn't say, just in case, "no your majesty" "dhany hai, or dhany if you would" "dhany, why was i called here?" "one of your co-workers has reported
that you've been sick for a while, they also pointed something else out that i will not bring up, but, Iki, the point is, is everything ok?" "yes, everything is fine, just
a little sick, nothing too bad" i forced a smile on my face. "you sure? 'cause it really seems like..something..Iki, you must tell me if it's something" "it's nothing
don't worry" "chihiro-" that was the first time she said my first name "i know it's something, as a queen it's none of my business, but as a person who cares for you,
i feel like i must know at some point, and i feel like i already know, chihiro, forgive me if this sounds rude but, are you pregnant?" she found me out, just like that,
i should just come clean now. "..yes, i didn't really want to say anything 'cause i knew people would ask about the father, i don't want people to know" "again, forgive me
if this sounds rude, but, was this...'by force'"? i can't tell her it was, everyone will suffer dearly because of it "no, of course not, just for privacy reasons"
"i understand, chihiro, how long have you been pregnant?" "4 months" "take the remaining 5 and anymore time you need off" "dhany, thank you, but, i need this job"
"if you still want to work we can send papers to your house" "alright, and, dhany, please don't tell anyone" "i won't, it's not my secret to tell anyway" i smile and walk
home. ~time skip, 5 months~ i was finishing some paper work as i was thinking, what if ash comes back? i mean, he said he would one day when the baby was born, and it
should be born soon, like very, very soon, i really hope he doesn't. 20 minutes passed and...my water broke, i'm curently at the hospital, i can hear people talk,
'who's the father?' 'why didn't she say anthing?' 'why isn't the father there with her?' then i hear dhany, "everyone, if she didn't want to say any of that, then
it was her choice, why does it matter?" the room fell silent, i smile, then i feel pain. ~time skip, after the baby is born~ i cry as they pass me my child, it was
tears of pain and dread, i look at her, thinking there'd be nothing but darkness in her, but, instead i saw purity, she had such a strong sence of light in her, i was
wrong, she wasn't going to turn into a hell spawn, and she deffinlty wasn't going to meet her father. "what are you going to name her?" one of the doctors asked
"hikari" they smile "such a beautiful name". some time passed and people could come in, when they did i was drowned in questions, "everyone! please! stop!, if she
doesn't want to give answers then don't make her!" "thank you, dhany" "so, chihiro, what did you name her?.." agini asked, seeing her face made me sad, she was cleaerly
mad, "..hikari". ~time skip, a few months after hikairs' birthday~ alot is going on at work, we have to meet with another colony, they want war, we all have to be there
but we made it so only one of us didn't have to be there, probably for me so i can be there for my child. "chihiro, can i talk to you for a second" it was énkyros
"yea" "you're the one taking the leave for the meeting?" "yes" "chihiro, i know you want to be there for your daughter, but we all need you there, you're really
good at this" "énkyros, i understand where you're coming from, but who will watch her?" "i will...wait...i can't, the queen and king will need their right hand man with
them for this" "...i guess i could get agini to do it, tell the queen i'll be there, just need to bring hikair ti agini" "alright and again, thank you". i fly to my
house and get hikair ready, then fly to aginis', when i get there i knock, she answers, "chihiro...what's up..?" "agini..i know that you're mad about this, but we
have much bigger things than this to be mad about" "what do you mean?" "another colony is tyring to start war, i'm needed there, but someone needs to watch hikari"
"and you want me to do it?" "yes" "ok, come back for her after we win this, there's no way we can lose if you're there" "thank you" "no problem" i fly off to do what
i have to. ~after the meeting~ we bearly got them to call off war, but we won none the less, and i fly over to agini to get hikari. when i arive i'm filled with nothing
but anger and sadness, "agini!? where's hikari!?" she starts to laugh "a demon came here and i gave her away" "you..you can't be serious.." "i am" "....angini salis,
you're put on trial for murder, and treason!" "you don't understand do you?" "i do! you're coming with me!" "chihiro, no" i use something i haven't used in a while,
i use strong balls of light to knock her out and bring her back to the court. when i got to the court the first thing i did was run to the queen, leaving agini with
énkyros, telling them that she's being on trial, they take her away. i went to the queen, "dhany, i would like to put agini on trial" "why my dear? what did she do?"
"..treason and murder.." "....hikari...she..she didn't.." "...handed her over to a demon.." dhanys' assitence had a look of horror on him, "parel..call in yoddha"
"yes of course". parel went to call in yoddha, the king, he's only called in for seriouse crimes.
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Oh boi, I'm changing alot, like, ALOT. Firstly, I'm gonna change how that baby is made and why. Secondly, I'm probably gonna change some of their names and personalities. And thirdly, I'm gonna change the setting, the older setting isn't bad, but won't work for what I have planned. These aren't even all my thoughts, but this has been going on for long enough. Till next, stay safe and I love you!
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