The Gifted School

sorry

Hey.
I don't know what to say.

This was supposed to be a good story. But, recently, I've been getting a lot of comments saying that the story doesn't make sense. And yeah I agree. I was a little girl with a dream and I never went back to revise my work.

So, I'm thinking about taking this story down and trying again. All the characters will still be here and everything I've written will stay.
But I want to rewrite this entire thing over. I need to figure this world out before I put it out into our world. It was put out too soon, it wasn't ready.

I'm sorry for disappointing you guys. I'll try again and I'll make it better. I will try to update every two weeks at most; even if it's only 200 words on the page. I'll try.

RECAP:
- the gifted school is a school for children with magical talents such as elemental manipulation, shape shifting, spell casting, and "super powers."
- Reyna, an element manipulator who also has the ability to shape shift, is the main protagonist of this story
- the other main protagonists are Cason, a love interest of Reyna's who can control flame and shift into a wolf; Leo, another love interest of Reyna's who can shift into a tiger; Arianna, Reyna's roommate and childhood friend who can shift into a wolf; and Luke, Arianna's mate who can also shift into a wolf. Originally, there were four of them. They are the Big Four. Leo appeared along the way. (He may not be in the revised version who knows)
- since Reyna can shift into many forms, she has the potential to have many different mates. However, her wolf form is the strongest of all her forms. (This may be changed as well)
- Reyna is stuck in a love triangle between Leo and Cason. She doesn't know who to pick.
- one day, she decided to be with Leo. And he is overjoyed. But, Cason is devastated.
- that same day, the school is attacked by the devil's minions and many are wounded and in critical condition. Instantly, the school is transformed into a boot camp rather than a learning facility.
- Luke, the Alpha of the Big Four's pack, has allowed every student to enter his pack and now is the overseer of all that goes on within campus. Arianna helps keep him sane and she takes control when needed. All praise her. Not all like it though.
- Reyna has a change of heart when Cason runs to her aid before Leo can get to her and she isn't so sure on her choice.
- she tells the boys she needs time to figure things out. But, she's visited by the Time Twins who tell her that she's running out of time to decide and if she does not, she will live without love.
- Reyna decides to plan the Moon Ceremony in order to become an official pack as well as get her mind off of things. She helps Arianna become an official Luna and they celebrate under the moon's brightness.

So... we'll see how this goes. I have high hopes for this story. Everything is unpublished.

...sorry for being awful at this.

Until next time,
n.