My Best Friends Sister (gxg)

Chapter One

'BRINGGGGG' 'BRIN-'
I pick my alarm clock up and throw it at the wall completely forgetting that it's probably going to smash, that's my fifth alarm clock I've broken this year I really need to stop doing that.
"LILY GET YOUR ASS DOWN STAIRS YOUNG LADY, YOUR GUNNA BE LATE FOR SCHOOL" shouted my mum up the stairs so I swing my legs over the bed and walk to the mirror I look like awful, my brown hair it stuck up in a ponytail with little bits of hair scattered everywhere and my pale skin looks really blotchy what a great way to start the morning.
I walk outside my room after getting dress in a pair of blue jeans and a Nike hoodie and walk down stairs to see my mum feeding my 2 year old brothers Alex and Aaron there breakfast and my older brother Mason eating MY favourite cereal I'll get him back later for that when he least expects it. I pick up a piece of toast from my mums breakfast and kiss her on the forehead along with my brother and drive to school.
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I arrive at school with 5 minutes to spare and see my best friend Zack standing there sitting on the hood of his car his blond hair styled back with some jeans and a shirt on, it may sound like I have a crush on him but I don't I actually have a crush on his sister, yep I'm a closeted lesbian that way too scared to come out.
                 I suddenly get thrown out my thoughts by Zack wrapping his arm around me and squishing me in a hug "your s...quishing my.. lungs" I say out of breath from his hugs because he has such a strong grip
"How's are you my main and only gal except my sister" did I forget to mention Zack is gay well he is, his boyfriend is amazing and so kind his name Axel. Zack's family consists of his two Dads George and James and his sister Maya so his family totally accepting his sisters a lesbian aswell. "Let's get on with school then" Axel says walking up to us and wraps his arms around Zack's muscular frame "how exciting" I say sarcastically.
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It gets to lunch and I'm already done Spanish and English was so long I walk into the canteen and I see Zack and Axel sitting at our table making up, I buy my lunch and slam it on the table making those two jump apart with red faces I giggle and say "Some of us would like to eat with out you two sucking faces thank you very much" so I eat my lunch and they eat and we talk about our first lesson and the bell goes
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The bell for end of the days goes and I go home and sleep I was just so exhausted.

Notes:
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